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Get Well, Brooke!


Writing for Brooke

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dmt1967
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For Our Ms. Brooke
This is a nice poem and it is written about a lady close to our hearts. Brooke is one of a kind and my thoughts are with her and her kin now. I hope she returns soon as well. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
    Me Too dmt. It stands as a testament to her popularity, that her last post was in May and she is still ranked as the site's #1 poet. I'd say that she probably had run several laps around most of us. Thanks for the nice review. Rose.
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For Our Ms. Brooke
This is a very nice tribute to Brooke. One she will surely appreciate. You are right she did find a lot of pleasure in life's simple things. This poem is well written and captures her tastes in flowers quite well.

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 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your kind review Brett. Nice to hear from you. Rose.
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Rating of Chapter 94 -
For Our Ms. Brooke
What a wonderful Rondeau Rose. Such truth in every line. She always has an upbeat poem for us every day. We will all rejoice when we see she is back with her cute little poems and Sawyers antics. Good job my friend. xxx Nancy


 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
    Thank you for such a wonderful review, Nancy and for the amazing six stars. I will be very happy to know that Brooke keeps getting better and that she will be able to get back on to a computer soon. I wrote quite a bit in hospital on the backs of my daily menus. (Yes, even in hospital you do get some food choices) so I hope that Brooke is sitting there doing the same.
    Can't wait to learn about her achievements and adventures. Rose.

reply by nancy_e_davis on 05-Jul-2015
    I was wondering that myself. LOL I hope she is.
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ONLY A BOY (she said) Adewpearl
She waits at crossroads where eagles soar high
Goodbyes are wingless without reasons to fly

I just presumed that Brook is not ok, as i was away for the past 7 months. I will contact you privately later on, as here my dearest, you brought back my living tears while reading your deep soul in that poem. Roy oh Roy, you should never ever, stop writing, you were born holding a PEN to write and write as long as it is meant to be for you, and US, the writers here and everywhere. Much love from Montreal. Terry xoxoxo


 Comment Written 04-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you so much my best mum...
    So happy to see you and hear that you are here.
    I am slowly coming back, so we are both on the upward.
    Missed you millions .
    Hope all is well as can be. Keep fighting.
    My best wishes,
    RG
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We Miss You
We miss you, indeed I always enjoyed reviewing with pleasure your daily poem.
I hope you are OK and soon be posting again, God bless you. Hugs! Lakeport.


 Comment Written 01-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
    Hi Erich, I am...been very busy...just came from Texas to Illinois...and am going to Florida tomorrow...and then back in two weeks to Illinois...and then back to Texas...thank you for caring Erich...and going back and reading my poem...God Bless you too...luff Linda xxoo

reply by lakeport on 01-Jul-2015
    you are very welcome, Hugs! lakeport,.

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    smiling back at ya...xxoo

reply by lakeport on 01-Jul-2015
    thank you very much, Hugs! Lakeport.

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
    your so welcome very much...xxoo

reply by lakeport on 02-Jul-2015
    thank you very much, Hugs! Lakeport.
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Brooke, Our Muse
Such an appropriate tribute to Brooke who is indeed our Muse and 'nourish us with words as dew /that gleam with pearescent hue ' - beautiful imagery to convey the impact of her poetic endeavours


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
    Thank you for the wonderful review, Zanya. I don't have anything active so it was a nice surprise. I do hope Brooke is doing well. I miss her poems, as so many do. Debi
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A Spoonful of Medicine
heh kids never stay still for a moment life is exciting and sweet
love the second line about sustainable energy it brings to mind a picture of a mum chasing a child at bed time around the house and running out of energy before the child does


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
    Thank you so much for digging this up. At the ripe old age of 75, I am blessed to still be able to give love-care to youngsters. Sometimes it is their energy that charges me.
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A Triolet For Brooke
I love this triolet for Brooke :) That picture is so cute and perfect. Excellent iambic tetrameter with great rhymes. The repeating lines are flawless. I feel Brooke is among us when I read the many poems dedicated to her. I miss her too.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
    Thank you so much, my friend, for the exceptional review and the honor of a six. It means a lot to me.
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Rating of Chapter 10020 -
Under Brooke's Wing
I must have missed this poem for Brooke. Glad I found it now :) I enjoyed reading your poem and reading your author notes. I miss Brooke so much that it's nice to read stories of her presence on fanstory. I found her to be a calm and encouraging teacher. I took a lot of classes with her and found her to be a wonderful friend too. You have penned nice quatrains with abcb rhymes. I can detect a singsong rhythm to your lines. I sure hope there will be an update on her condition and situation soon.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015
    Hi Joy,
    I know what you mean. I have never been able to take one of her classes yet she has ever been there for me with solid critique and suggestions to help me grow as a poet. I certainly would not have improved, as I have, without her patient help.
    Thank you so much for your impression of my poem. I really appreciate your thoughtful review.
    Have a great evening,
    Bill
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A heart-felt wish
I feel writer statement is positive, seemingly hesitate during flow course, but clearly conveyed holding writer intents, I found the write refreshing in nature


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015
    Thank you, TPAC for your review and comments.
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