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Get Well, Brooke!


Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Faery Mother"

Writing for Brooke

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Eigle Rull
 
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This is a short, well written poem. It flows very well. It is a beautiful tribute, my friend. I enjoyed reading it very much. It is excellent in every way.

Always with respect,


 Comment Written 28-May-2015



reply by the author on 28-May-2015
    Thank you Eigle, a great cloud of sadness hangs over us all. I have been friend with Brooke for five years, I wish I was closer and could visit. For now, she needs our prayers. Love, Kay.

reply by Eigle Rull on 29-May-2015
    I will include Brooke in my own nightly prayers, my friend.

    Always with respect,
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Aussie this is a lovely poem for our dear friend and fellow writer, Brooke. I miss seeing post from her in my box each day. Patricia


 Comment Written 28-May-2015



reply by the author on 28-May-2015
    Patricia, She has been our guide and friend for many years; we joined FS at the same time. Sadness hangs over us all. Love, Kay.
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You send a wonderful tribute into the universe with this heartfelt piece. What a truly beautiful way to describe her ... fairy mother. In many ways she has been for all of us and your lovely words confirm it. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing it.

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 Comment Written 28-May-2015



reply by the author on 28-May-2015
    Miranda loves faeries, Brooke is always talking about it. I am at a loss what to write at this time; heavy cloak of sadness covers me, so far away, can't visit only pray. Thank you friend.

reply by Mystic Angel 7777 on 28-May-2015
    I am under that cloak with you. I have been meditating about it and while I know all will be well and done for the best .... there is always that teeny bit of lingering human selfishness which wishes to keep her here with us. I guess we do not shed all the mortal foibles until we depart ... then we become nothing but heart.

reply by the author on 28-May-2015
    God knows her needs, a little bit of selfishness does want her back. Still, she wouldn't want to be crippled. Her soul flies free and she knows all of us. Bless you, Kay XX
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I became worried the first week she didn't post and contacted her. Brooke said she lost her sister and would be back soon. It has been several weeks since then and I have still been worried but didn't want to intrude again. We all love her so much. She is our mainstay.

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015
    Alan, She has aggressive MS and is in hospital. Daughter, Miranda left a note on forum. Sadness covers me like a cloak. We have been constant friends for five years. If you are a forum member, read the notes. Love, Kay XX

reply by Alan K Pease on 28-May-2015
    Thank you Aussie for letting me know that Brooks has MS. I'll pray. Take care - love Alan
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