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Viewing comments for Chapter 10001 "The Harbor"

Writing for Brooke

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but she turns ugly into fabulous
and a bad day into a loving smile;

Hopefully, Brooke will be back with us to do this again. Your poem is a nice tribute to her.

Lois


 Comment Written 30-May-2015



reply by the author on 30-May-2015
    Thank you, Lois!
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You are right. As I put it in my poem, fanstory is Brooke's backyard. And over that territory, she does stand like lady liberty welcoming us all. I think that finding beauty in a weed speaks to her seeing beauty and merit in everyone. I'm sure this poem will help to lighten her load.


 Comment Written 29-May-2015



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    Thank you!
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HI Dos, this is so very nicely written...I know Brooke will love it...I know she is in all our prayers...was so good to talk to you today...you make me smile...and I love hearing you laugh...this is a wonderful tribute to Brooke...Love ya Numero Dos...rest!!!


 Comment Written 28-May-2015



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    Thank you, my friend and fellow writer! Linda Two

reply by l.raven on 31-May-2015
    you are so welcome Dos...so sorry I didn't have any sixes...sigh...take care will talk at ya soon...behind on replies...love ya you...Uno
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What a super way to compare Brooke with Lady Liberty. She does welcome all and give "refuge" to the weary poets with her expertise. Good job and thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 28-May-2015



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    Thank you so much, jannypan!
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Great photo of the statue of liberty that complements your poem perfectly. I enjoyed how you mentioned dandelions as well. You want her to return safely to the harbour. I am sure Brooke will lie your poem.


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    Thank you, robina!
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Lively Linda: I like your poem honoring precious Brooke. She is a lovely lady who we looked forward to reading and chatting with her. I would be reviewing her poetry as she was reviewing mine before church. She is an elder spreading love like those dandelions. I like your images with the harbor and statue of Liberty. I like how she shares her family with us. I'm praying for Brooke too. God bless.
flylikeaneagle


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    Thanks for reading, flylikeaneagle! Linda
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My thoughts and prayers are with Brooke and her family. Her illness sounds serious I and fear she may not return. I hope I am wrong and continue to pray for her. Beautiful poem that describes her so well.


 Comment Written 28-May-2015



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    Thank you for reading and commenting.
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This is a beautifully worded poem for our Brooke, her talent to write about dandelions far surpasses any other, but again how many of us write about dandelion? Just askin' Patricia


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    Thank you for reading.
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