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Viewing comments for Chapter 10001 "The Sea and Thee."

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Dear Kay, this is so touching. I feel your emotion come through in this lovely poem for Brooke. I still cannot get my head around the thought that she will have to spend her life in a nursing home, she has always been so vibrant, and just does not deserve what life has now dished out for her. We haven't heard anymore from Miranda, I just cannot understand why she can't stay in touch with us by laptop. MS does not affect the mind. I just don't understand this at all. But, that aside, I know she will love this poem from you, my lovely friend. :) Sandra


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
    How did the hospital go? Yes, I can't understand no follow up from Miranda. Some people think she will get better, she won't, she could live for years as the body breaks down. What a dreadful life sentence. Anyway, thanks for reading, I appreciate your review. Love, K. :-)XX
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A well written poem. It has very good pace and paints a great picture of
a sandy beach with gentle rolling waves.
A easy read that has been written with a lot passion and love.
Thank you.


 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
    Thank you Lil, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kay.
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Lovely tribute to Brook, we on this site are all missing her and wishing her well. Nice imagery and good use of rhyming to convey your message. In verse 2, it should be creatures' lee. Most enjoyable. Faye


 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
    Faye, Thanks for reading, yes, well all miss her. Blessings, Kay.
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Thank you Kay for telling of Brooke battle with MS. For someone who continually write her poems with love it seem to be unfair, but life is a mixture of good and bad. We also have Maureen and possibly Artemis who have been away from us for a while. Maureen definitely with MS.

Lovely thought of yours with a lovely poem


 Comment Written 31-May-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Alan, I believe our fate is marked out before we are born; she is one feisty lady. I don't hold high hopes for recovery, most Fanstorians think she is bullet-proof, nobody is. My love to you and Marilyn. :-)K XX
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OH Kay, this is so beautiful...Brooke is so going to love it...you know sweetie girl...one day we will all meet by the sea...and walk in the sand together...beautiful you...so very nicely written...love ya Linda luff...xxoo


 Comment Written 31-May-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Sigh...thank you best friend. We all love the sea and she is no exception. Love, K.

reply by l.raven on 03-Jun-2015
    no she isn't...I really miss her Kay...it must have been bad whatever happened when they found she had this MS...hummmm...you are sooooooo welcome bestest friend...luff xxoo
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Kace, as always you present not only a stunning and visual presentation of word artistry but your heart and soul flood and spill from every work. Brooke will cherish this work for many many years to come. To honor her with such beauty is to honor you with immense love and character. Beautiful.. you friend and fan always.. Jimi


 Comment Written 31-May-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Dear Fidget, Thanks so much for your kind words. We Fanstorians need to stick together. Love, K.
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Kay, Your poem is a nice tribute to Brooke and shows how the two of you must have "talked" at times. Your "rock pools" bring back memories of Australia for me.

Lois


 Comment Written 31-May-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Luverly Lois, Thanks so much for reading. Glad you remember Oz.
    love, K.
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Wow! This is a beautiful tribute to your friend Brooke. It is full of love and good wishes. It has great rhyming and excellent flow. Nicely done, my friend.

I've read many poems from those on FS all going to Brooke. I don't know her, however, I can feel that she is a well loved person. I'm sure she will love this poem, my friend.

Always with respect,


 Comment Written 31-May-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Thanks Eigle, she is a fanstory icon. Struck down with a devastating disease. Love, K.
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This is absolutely lovely. Yes, Brooke loves the sea and has told me many times how she envies that I live just a few blocks from the Pacific Ocean. I am sure she will enjoy this one.


 Comment Written 30-May-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    You and I share the Pacific Ocean (me, 20 mins away) thanks for reading. :-)K XX
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This is a beautifully tender and heartfelt tribute to your friend Brooke.
Exceptionally well done, Aussie, thanks so much for sharing.
warm regards, wendy.


 Comment Written 30-May-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Wendy, Thanks so much for reading neighbour. Brooke is an icon on FS. Getting cold tonight. :-)xx K.

reply by walbc on 01-Jun-2015
    I know about Brooke and how she's been #1 poet for forever. She sure has a natural talent. It's so sad that she is so unwell. I hope she improves soon.
    This morning it is Freezing! have got seven layers on plus the air conditioner. I've got a thermostat problem with my body, can't handle the cold. xo

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
    I too can't control my body thermostat; did you know that the Govt. will give you $80 every three months towards A/C? Pensioner I think you have to be.
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