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Get Well, Brooke!


Writing for Brooke

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inside echo
 
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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
The Beauty of a Brook
What a beautifully written poem. A wonderful dedication to your friend also. Very gently written, but displays many beautiful images. Your comparisons work perfectly. Well done. Thank you for sharing.
tgc
echo


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
    Thanks so much for reviewing.Thank you Linda.

reply by inside echo on 20-Jun-2015
    You are welcome.
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Linda Kay
 
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The Beauty of a Brook
Very strong word choice and flow. Excellent sentiment, the Brook will face scars and pain in life, but will always remain beautiful.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
    Thanks for reviewing Linda. Let's all hope Brooks gets better.

reply by Linda Kay on 20-Jun-2015
    I am new here, can you fill me in a little? I have come across several wonderful poems for her. She must be special to have such support.
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BLACKDYKE
 
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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
The Beauty of a Brook
And so it will, and so it should Squires Gal. A brook never looses it's way. It might be diverted, but it never looses it's way. Beautiful poetry, beautiful words beautiful symmetry. Good picture to accompany. Eric


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
    Thank you so much Eric for your review and exceptional rating. I was definitely "inspired".
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Warped Counting Poem
Charlie, this has to be the best poem I've read by you.

It has humor, of course; who could deny:

Ten little bed bugs
In their graves are laid
There are no more bed bugs
Thank you, God and RAID.

Also, your tempo and rhyming was good.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Jay. Charlie
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Margaret Snowdon
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Ten little bed bugs
In their graves are laid
There are no more bed bugs
Thank you, God and RAID

Ha ha - Brooke will appreciate this, Charlie -
she's fond of writing about the tens!!

Margaret


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Margaret. Charlie
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Ha, ha, ha! Charlie you are a riot! You have one of the all time great senses of humor. I have said more than once that you are a uniquely twisted individual. I find that a particularly pleasing quality. Good job.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Nomi. Charlie
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Sis Cat
 
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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
The Beauty of a Brook
This is an eloquent and evocative poem and ode to Brooke. I enjoyed your use of metaphor for such a talented poet. The floor of your words capture the flow of the brook and Brooke's creativity. Your rhymes are elegant. Thank you for sharing your tribute poem.


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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
    Thanks for reviewing and I continue to pray for Brooke.
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A Warped Counting Poem
As soon as I saw your title, I thought of Brooke--I hope she has a chance to read your poem soon and enjoy the smiles. I started to itch as I read your rhymed quatrains and was grateful to RAID too! Cheers and bug-free weekend- Joan


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Joan. Charlie
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Patrick G Cox
 
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Warped Counting Poem
Hi Charlie,

Once again you manage to create something amusing and I'm sure Brooked will appreciate it - especially as she has been playing with her own 'ten green ...' renditions as you know.

Nicely done.

Patrick


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Patrick. Charlie
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Gert sherwood
 
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A Warped Counting Poem
Perfect poem for all of us to read
Full of itchy fun with ten little bed bugs
Makes us recall Brooke's various poem with the #10

Gert


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments Gert. Charlie

reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Jun-2015
    You are welcome Charlie
    Gert
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