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A Warped Counting Poem
LOL, LOL, LOL - I'm sure Brooke would love this counting poem. It's a great deviation from her regular counting poems, but it tickled my sense of humour, which many of hers do as well.
Great writing, Charlie - and I'm glad that the Raid works!
Rose.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    I trust you are improving, Rose. Thank you for your review and comments. Charlie

reply by Just2Write on 19-Jun-2015
    Yes, thanks. I'm on the mend. R.

reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Good for you, Rose. Charlie
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I got a real kick out of this one and I am sure Brooke will love it too. I like that you counted up and not down, saving the last verse for the demise of the horrid little critters. Nice work with this one, I enjoyed it very much.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Sasha. Charlie
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Must have come in contact with the little buggers hey?
What away to count. I think I'll stick to the old fashion counting stories.
They won't scare the children.
Thanks for sharing this different approach to this counting biz.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Debbie. Charlie
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Despite how this made my skin crawl (pun intended), I had to smile at it humor. I think it's just the kind of poem that a little boy might enjoy. Great rhyming, too, Charlie.

:) Bev


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



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    Thank you for your review and comments, Bev. Charlie

reply by Writingfundimension on 19-Jun-2015
    You're welcome, Charlie. :) Bev
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Humor at its worst is correct Charlie.HAHAHA Who would have ever thought bed-bugs were humorous? I think it will make Brooke smile. I wonder how she is doing. I love your closing line! Well done my friend. Nancy


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Margaret posted an updatee on the forum. Brooke is in Therapy. Thank you for your review and comments, Nancy. Charlie

reply by nancy_e_davis on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for the update Charlie. Nancy

reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    You're welcome, Nancy. Charlie
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Lol, I think we have every other bug in the south creeping into my home but so far (knock on wood) no bed bugs. Those buggers are one of the creepist for me. It gives me the shivers just thinking about them.

Trish


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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Trish. Charlie
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Cute and funny poem, a nice variation to count up rather than down. Good rhymes and rhythm and a funny ending solving the infestation problem. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Eleanor. Charlie
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I don't know if I'm laughing or itching harder! I'm sure it will give Brooke a smile and a giggle. She sure is missed. Has anybody heard how she is doing? Last I heard she was in the hospital. I don't know if I miss her poems or her reviewing suggestions. This is a great addition to her get-well book.
deb


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Margaret left a not in the forum. Thank you for your review and comments, Eeb. Charlie
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this is another fine tribute to brooke and her way to countdown animals. although this is counting up:) we all miss brooke tremendously, she inspired us all with her talent!
thank you for shairng!
blessings!
rebekka x


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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Riuselius. Charlie
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What a clever counting poem! I'm sure that children everywhere would benefit from reading this poem. For real, kids, especially boys, would absolutely love it. I know adults will. And the last line is priceless! Go Raid!
Rhonda


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Rhonda. Charlie
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