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Get Well, Brooke!


Writing for Brooke

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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
The Beauty of a Brook
Quire's Gal: lovely poem for Brooke about the travels and duties of a brook. You did well with the pun and the picture is calming and refreshing just like Brooke! Good work. livelylinda


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
    Thank you for reviewing livelylinda. I definitely was "inspired".
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Warped Counting Poem
Well, this is an original counting poem, isn't it just? Lol! I reckon Brooke will enjoy reading it.
I liked the conclusion:
Ten little bed bugs
In their graves are laid
There are no more bed bugs
Thanks to God and RAID


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Nicole. Charlie
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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
The Beauty of a Brook
Your words reflect the essence of Brooke's spirit. She gleams the rock and waltzes with the shore is a perfect line that reflects her poetic form. Your images of nature remind me of Brooke and her poetry.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
    Thank you mermaids. I hope she gets to see all these poems.
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Warped Counting Poem
Very amusing poem dedicated to Brooke. You have a good sense of humor and that's what people like when they are not feeling well. Good rhyme and flow. Perfect picture used for your write.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you f or your review and comments

reply by meggie13 on 19-Jun-2015
    You are welcome.
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Tomes Johnston
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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
The Beauty of a Brook
This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a lovely poem. It reminds me of my childhood in Ireland. We used to go fishing in the lakes and brooks.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
    Thanks so much for reviewing.

reply by Tomes Johnston on 21-Jun-2015
    My pleasure
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The Beauty of a Brook
Excellent Poem! The author words were descriptive, creative and thought provoking. The reader pondered on the words
of this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
    Thanks for your time and review. Let's all hope Brooke gets better.
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Warped Counting Poem
Hi, Charlie. Reminds me of ten little indians. remember that one when you were a kid? I would suggest one change were it my poem:

"Thank you, God and RAID" Make this "Thanks to God and RAID"

Take care, Charlie. Bob


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you, Bob, for your review and comments. The change has been maid.
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A Warped Counting Poem
Raid is my savior as well my friend. I liked your poem very much and thought it was funny and original. The poem also told a story which is another thing I love. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, DMT.
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Rating of Chapter 24 -
A Warped Counting Poem
This is a very cute poem. Brooke will love it when she gets to read it. I am sure, she will. She loves counting poem, well at least for children. This one doesn't fit into that category, but it's still very well written.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your review and comments, Barbara. Charliie
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Linda Kay
 
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Rating of Chapter 93 -
Rainbows awaiting.
This did a good job of saying what you wanted to say without any rhymes. It build and flowed well in the nonette format. It is a nice show of support and community from a Fanstory friend.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
    Thankyou Linda for reading and for your comments, much appreciated.
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