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Think Of Me Today


I Will Think Of You

  29 total reviews 
Comment by
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Bill Schott
 
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This poem sends that nice vibe out to help facilitated an emotion that may be needed, but undernourished. Positivity is the key to overcoming most incommunicado durations.


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
    Thank you so very much Mr Bill I hope I can keep the muse from running for a while ..Some times it just runs right off the keyboard lol
    tk
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Treischel
 
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A delicate romantic reverie in this set of unrhymed couplets. Touching thoughts of missing someone very much. A melancholy mood induced by separation. A very nice piece, well done.


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
    Thank you so very much Mr T for taking the time to read and comment on this lil diddy of mine
    TK
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TK;
-I did enjoy this short quip very much as it was well written from the bottom of your heart, or so it seemed. The words feel genuine and beautifully written.
-There is good use of enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concepts in one stanza in line to the next without a syntactical break.
-Thank you for sharing and posting this TK and may the good Lord be with you and yours.
Alex


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
    Thanks much Alex I have been moving so it has been a bit hard to find the time to read, review or even write lately Hope this has come to an end and I will be able to get back to normal once again Humm ok now normal for me can have very many meanings lol
    TK
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w.j.debi
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What a romantic thought, two people connected because they are thinking of each other. Time and space cannot defeat true love. Love reaches out and touches us in more ways than we can define or describe. Simply beautiful, TK.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
    Thank you very much Lady D. for such kind words I am glad you enjoyed
    TK
Comment by
luna_catkins
 
 
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such a brisk sincere sparklet. just in the middle of my night - some wandering comet brought this wondrous verse of yours onto my eyelash...
tonight i'm going to fall asleep smiling...:)
thank you, tk.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
    Wow Did you know I hitched a ride on that comet that brought you that sparkle. That was the way my thoughts came your way.. Now a moonbeam graces you beauty as you think of me tonight... When you awake you will know I was their with you as you...You will fell my presence on your skin, my body smell will permeate your mind... Yes I see you smiling and I am smiling too
    Good Morning !!
    TK
    PS thanks so much for the great review and the lovely six as well You have stimulated my mind as I think you can tell lol Ha bet you never got a reply like this one before
    tk

reply by luna_catkins on 17-Jul-2015
    good morning! what a night! :-)
    ps: ok, let's say, one of my favourites... ;):)
    ty.
    ps2: let's do it again. hihi.
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K. Lorraine
 
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Sir Knight...
Lovely as always...
I haven't been around for awhile, but something spoke to mind and said check my messages. I guess that was you sending me a telepathic message.
Such a cute new photo of your adorable family.
I will look forward to more of your wonderful poems and your devilish teasing.
Hugs, Lady K.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
    Thank you much Lady K. I to have been absent for a while as I have been moving and you know what a pain that can be... Glad you liked the photo of all of us..
    TK

reply by K. Lorraine on 19-Jul-2015
    Where did you move? Are you still on the Big Island? K.

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
    Yes Lady K Still am here for another month or so.. I just moved out of the big house down to the guest house...Will be moving back to the mainland after some med procedures are taken care of here..

reply by K. Lorraine on 20-Jul-2015
    Sir Knight, God be with you and a speedy recovery. Leaving paradise is such sweet sorrow. Keep in touch. Lady K.
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BeasPeas
 
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Oooooohhh! This is so nice. Simply written and constructed, but in its simplicity it's romantic and impactful. Anything more complicated wouldn't work as well. Marilyn


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
    Thank you so much Marilyn for the great review..Hope now that I have settle in after my move I will be able to contribute more of my words of WIZ-DUMB LOL
    TK
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Pam (respa)
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-I like this poem very much. Clever artwork.
-I like the idea of how if she thinks of you, you will know it.
-Stanza three is good with "spreading a smile on my face".
-I very much like
"I will know the touch
of your mind on mine." It has good reference to the beginning.
-Nice ending.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
    Thanks much respa ...Hope now that I have settle in after my move I will be able to contribute more of my words of WIZ-DUMB LOL

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Jul-2015
    You are very welcome. I look forward to continued 'words of WIZ-DUMB.' However, the 'WIZ' is anything but 'Dumb!'
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Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem. It reminds me of how two people who care deeply for each other are so interconnected. I like the short lines that add to the flow. The artwork is great. Your message is strong.

Well done. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
    Thank you so much Janny for your kind words...Hope now that I have settle in after my move I will be able to contribute more of my words of WIZ-DUMB LOL
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angelface2
 
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Aw, you're such a romantic guy, TK. Love this little poem. I like the picture too. Are those pooches yours? They are so cute. I don't think I've ever had such a close connection with a man, but my daughter and I are often on the same wave link, and a close friend also. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
    Thank you much Ms Sally for such kind words..Yes they are ours Mini, Mighty and Moe ...And screech the bi-polar parrot as well lol
    tk
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