Free verse: Title:The First Kiss. Comments: This poem describes the feelings generated by a first kiss. The author uses imagery and adjectives well to engender a flooding experience "as electrical impulses slice Through the body leaving a warm flush". The kiss was spontaneous "Spontaneous, in the heat of the moment" and this led to the unexpected response of "Echoes a sonic boom of sensuous desire" describing latent feelings already there waiting for an opportunity to be expressed "Opening a world of joy and laughter". I found this poem easy to read and a joy to think about. I gave it five stars.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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