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The First Kiss


The mature can be mesmerized by a kiss.

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
hannahorion
 
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Free verse: Title:The First Kiss. Comments: This poem describes the feelings generated by a first kiss. The author uses imagery and adjectives well to engender a flooding experience "as electrical impulses slice Through the body leaving a warm flush". The kiss was spontaneous "Spontaneous, in the heat of the moment" and this led to the unexpected response of "Echoes a sonic boom of sensuous desire" describing latent feelings already there waiting for an opportunity to be expressed "Opening a world of joy and laughter". I found this poem easy to read and a joy to think about. I gave it five stars.


 Comment Written 19-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
    Thank you for your kind words and your 'excellent' rating. Do stop by again.

reply by hannahorion on 19-Jul-2015
    My pleasure.
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Mary H-W
 
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Wow, captivating and intense. Well written and described
Smooth flow and enjoyable read.
Good all around look, with the picture and colours


 Comment Written 19-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
    Thank you for your kind words and 'excellent' rating. Do stop by again.
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