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A Special Love


A Triolet

  36 total reviews 
Comment by
nancyjam
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Beautiful Triolet in perfect form as to rhyme
and placement of repeating lines which creates a
fluid expression of thought.
It is a very special love indeed! What a sweet little one!
Nancy


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
    Thanks for reading the triolet, Nancy. I'm so glad you liked my picture too. I love that little girl!
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GWinterwin
 
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What a beautiful picture, she is a sweetheart. I can surely relate since I have a daughter, and four granddaughters. Another great job of getting a message told.


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
    Yes, you're right. She is still a sweetheart. Thank you so much for this warm review of my poem.
Comment by
Ridley Williams
 
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Hi MM,

Well, this about the sweetest poem I've read for some time.
You brought back memories of when my daughter was born...a special moment for a dad!
She was and is the light of my life and I will always remember holding her for the first time.

I appreciated the strong presentation of this tender theme and the beautiful way the repeating line melded into the poem...it was a pleasure to read!

Hope all is well,
Bill


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
    Aw Bill... what a sweet review! Thank you so much for the supportive comments and for the extra star. It is always a treat for me to have you visit my portfolio. I'm especially glad this brought back a special memory for you. How many children do you have?

reply by Ridley Williams on 07-Aug-2015
    I have a daughter, Julianne, from my first marriage many years ago; she now teaches seventh grade in Reno.
    And, Michelle and I have two boys, Ryan and Drew, both in their mid thirties.
    All my kids were born in Truckee, so we know they had it good growing up.
    We have four grandkids from the mix, also:)
    How many kids and grandkids do you have?
Comment by
flylikeaneagle
 
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Miss Merri: congrats on your upcoming year seven, blessed year for you!

I like your triolet. I think daughters are the apple of daddy's eye. We need to
treasure all these seasons of time. I shoot photos of my daughters. I like your
line that a daddy knows there is a special place in his heart. I hope you keep
this for your daughter in a photo book.

Have a blessed day!( I have have been here for a year!) flylikeaneagle


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
    Thank you for the congratulations and thank you for the nice things you said about this poem. I think it is absolutely true that dads and daughters have a very special relationship. It is true for my husband with both our daughters, and it was certainly true for me and my father.
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Treischel
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That is truly beautifully expressed. Great utilization of the repeated lines and nicely transitioned through out. This line is particularly brilliant: She smiles and he's at once beguiled. The poem deserves a six. Alas, I'm out.


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem, Thomas. Thank you very much for the kind words and the excellent rating. I'm also honored that you'd say this deserves a six. How nice of you!
Comment by
Just2Write
 
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You use the repeating lines very well in this poem very effectively, and each time, they seem fresh. That isn't easy to do with Triolet, but it is the difference between a good one and a great one.
A very loving and warm poem that was a pleasure to read.
Rose.


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
    Thank you for your kind words Rose. It seems I've kind of overdone the love theme lately, but maybe now I'll try to write a horror story or something. LOL I guess I didn't realize all the mush that has been flowing lately. :p
Comment by
RGstar
 
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How nice, MissMerri...you make me proud. We often hear about the bond between mother and child, yet seldom do we hear of father and child...especially for a lady. Thank you for giving us worth with this little gem.
Best wishes,
have a good day.
RGstar


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
    Fathers are incredibly important... and I think especially so in the life of a daughter. A father's worth can never be overestimated. Thank you for your sweet review RG. I appreciated your input so much.
Comment by
meggie13
 
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The love between a father and daughter is very special. It is sad that a lot of fathers do not have the chance to experience that love, disappointing their daughters. Seems like Danny is a loving father and his baby knows it. Good alliteration in : thrives through. Beautiful presentation of your poem.


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
    Yes... I agree that a love between father and daughter is a special thing. Thank you for the comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem.

reply by meggie13 on 11-Aug-2015
    You are very welcome.

reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2015
    You are very welcome.
Comment by
patsolstad
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And what's not to love about this beautiful triolet?! You have used meter and rhyme in a most skillful manner. I will remember the darling face and the touching words for a long time. Excellent work!


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
    What a nice thing to say! I appreciate this kind review and the comments about the picture too. Thank you very much!
Comment by
Ronni
 
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Merri, you certainly aced this message on that special love between a child
and father, and especially daughters! What an adorable and poignant pic
that shows pure love for her daddy. Your message is most priceless and
precious, says it all so heart warmingly! Thanks for sharing.
Love and blessings always! Ronni


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
    Thank you for this kind review, Ronni. I'm rather fond of that little girl in the picture too. She is now much bigger, but there, I think she was about 16 months old. I'm so pleased that you liked the message in this triolet. Thanks for stopping by.

    MM
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