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The writing itself I believe was great and the concept quite humorous. The only critique I can really suggest is just my own personal preferences, which is I'm not to crazy about how modern it is. I do realize though that that is what makes this poem what it is so therefore, i don't really have any suggestions as to what might need work.


 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017


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All I can say is ,"wow." I can't see this poem not winning. It's hardcore, it stirs emotions, it flips the outcome on the usual winners. We see the stupidity and cowardliness of these gangsters when they are confronted with a bigger and deadlier evil. Each stanza is it's own story in a poem, intense, gruesome. I'll say it again, "wow."


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2015



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    Thank you. I really appreciate the great review.
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Heck, Lance. Neither Michael Myers nor Leatherface has anything on THIS demented do-gooder. I say "do-gooder" for a reason. If he's ridding the world of lil' wannbe thugs, hell...have at it, my maniacal man. More power to ya'!

Too bad about that last lovely lady, tho'...about her gettin' away, I mean.

Shame...

Best of luck to you in the Halloween Contest judging...

~Dean ;}


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015


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This was a twisted and demented fun poem. It's sad that I had to laugh at their horrible fate, but you wrote it so wonderfully. I don't know why you don't think you could win with this poem, I thought it was awesome. Maybe it is not for the faint of heart, but it sure offered everything the contest asked for, scary, fun, and definitely a horror.

Good luck in the contest.

Trish


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015


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I think it SHOULD WIN.
It's entertaining and why couldn't a demon go after rude trick or treaters?
I loved the count down as he went after them one at a time.
Wonder Woman lived--no wonder--it was after midnight. No longer Halloween.
Fantastic ending.
Love these lines: "I'm gonna slice you up, you sick demon fuck," the dude cried
My ripping out his still beating heart proved that he had lied

Oh, I forgot to mention: Fine rhyming quatrains and good cadence.

Good luck in the contest that you should win!!!

:) ellen







 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015


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Amazing! Hands down the most original, twisted, fucked up, incredible poem I have read this Halloween!
As strange as it may sound, what I liked about it best was the morbid sense of humor. Like, 'youd think people would learn not to hide in the dark'
and 'not one genius thought to run'
This was amazingly awesome. I gotta bookmark it too.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015


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This is like a really demented version of Ten Little Monkeys Jumping On The Bed. I loved the take you did and even though Halloween poems aren't generally my favorite thing to read I'm glad I read this one


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2015


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I enjoyed it. I think you should have a good chance of winning. The dialect and rhymes and the story itself work for me. Of course, to an old sailor/millworker
the language is totally acceptable...


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2015


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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! PRICELESS! I'm still laughing, and my face is sore from grinning so widely. This is sure not one for the kiddies, but I have to ask - do you live in my neighbourhood? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Seriously fubar! (And definitely original!)


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2015


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Sounds like a typical weekend in Chicago. I don't know how you could have written this from the perspective you did without using the language. This is hard-core thugdom, and no one seems to care about a human life. Glad the gal was saved, anyway. Excellent expression and you capture the irrational rage. judi


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2015


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