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The Violin


'An Audio Poem' read by the author

  101 total reviews 
Comment by
CrystieCookie999
 
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I like so many of the ideas inherent in this poem. You have won quite a few prizes, but it looks like the last one was a year ago. One of my favorite lines is "A bridge forms keys to notes from your heart" because it seems that your poetry also does that! I am trying to figure out the era of this poem, as it seems rooted in the past, or at least a century ago with the use of the word "T'was" and also with someone carrying a sack around and using wood.


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
    Dear author, thank you so much., it has been a while since this review with my absence over a year. I have set up a one month subscription to see how it goes and to say thank you so much for your review of this work. I have a few reviews old outstanding to thank for, so most will have this message yet, it is of the same utmost gratitude to each. Thank you so much, please have a wonderful day. RGstar
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This is so outstanding I don't even know where to begin! This flows so soft and easy..I just don't want this poem to end. I am just held in wonder...sigh


 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019



reply by Richard J on 23-Feb-2019
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Sean Bennett
 
 
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Woah! This is absolutely fantastic. What an incredible talent you have. I enjoyed this immensely and read it through several times. Thank you for it. I am going to check out some of your others when I get home from work.


 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017



reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
    Thank you, for the super six and the time to read into my portfolia in support of this.
    My very best to you. Wishing you a super Christmas.
    My best wishes.
    RGstar
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Kyanro
 
 
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Beautifully written and appreciated. My grandson loves the violin, your description of it is gives such hope to a musical instrument that can sound so sad, I could hear the violin as he passed. Great job! I loved it!


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
    Oh my word, how did you mange to find this. Thank you so much for taking an interest. Made my day. My best wishes to you this lovely Sunday.
    RGstar
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tbacha58
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And those hands so carved all that was good
Each day she came bearing courage and wood
And if joys of sight meant far less delight
The warmth of touch glowed wonderfully bright
Twilights returned the day he went away
Sadly spoke of a destiny to pay

Hello RG, Happy New Year to you, in health especially.
Of course this poem needed to be a winner, the sadness in this poem was so deeply described, it brought tears to my eyes, as i will be following that man, leaving my heart in Montreal.
Yes life is always full of sadness, nobody to share our pain, alone me and me, like u do when u are feeling down.
I really enjoyed reading your poetic story, you are amazing RG, and life ahead of you, I am predicting it will be a prosperous year for you. And that will make me so happy. Terry xoxo


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
    Hey, Terry. Thank you so much. How happy I am to see little mum with words and heart back in place. I am still at the hotel but looking to be strong after the storm.
    Thank you for making my day with this, but don't waste sixes on those past for I know how much you value my work.
    luv u always.
    Take good care.
    RG
Comment by
MaBaker
 
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How lovely. So pure and beautiful. I don't write poetry but I enjoy read good poetry and I enjoyed listening to this lovely poem. You are at your best form and easy to read. No typos that I could see but with your attention to detail didn't expect any. Regards Mabaker


 Comment Written 29-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
    Thank you so much, Mabaker. So good to have new support formy work.
    Sending you a very best wish for the New Year.
    RGstar
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This is one of your best. Beginning and ending with the smaller font observations regarding humility and meekness doesn't go unnoticed. It kind of reinforces the message contained in the story on a visual level.
An absolutely beautiful honed parable full of both pathos and joy.
This poem speaks to the heart and infuses the soul


 Comment Written 28-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
    Thank you so much. You spoke the words of the very efforts I seek to attain.
    Thank you so much.
    Thanks also for the super six stars.
    Always a pleasure t see your name.
    My best wishes,
    RG
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She asked of his hands: so gentle and pure
He asked of her grace: so simple and sure

"Four strings of love for each season's start
A bridge forms keys to notes from your heart
Slender its neck, your fingers to attend
A wand to wield for all sorrows to end"

And the humble shall reign through all disdain
As the meek doth wade through thunder and rain
And if melodies define our vessels of love
Let eagles bow to the song of the dove

Exceptional verse from first word to last.

BRAVO!



 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
    Hi, Sara . Thank you so much.
    Looking forward to reading some of your poetry in the future.
    thank you so much for the six stars.
    My best wishes,
    Have a great day.
    RGstar
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A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
    Thank you so much
Comment by
CobiDawn
 
 
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I wish i had a six star left to give you because this beautiful materpiece desrves a six. You truly have a God given gift. I am wiping the tears from my eyes as I write this review. God bless and I will be voting for you.


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
    Six in the words of your wishes and emotions which I so thank you for, my friend...good to have you on board.
    My best wishes.
    Thanks for the support.
    Have a great day.
    RG

reply by CobiDawn on 28-Nov-2015
    You're very welcome. :)
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