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delight in your eyes

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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello Ronni
What an unique comparison between and man and a woman
to make them desire each other to softly dance into each others heart
I like your thought.

Gert


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2015
    Thank you dear Gert. Happy you enjoyed and shared your kind
    supportive thoughts and comments. Great to have you peek in.
    Blessings and best wishes always, Ronni
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Poetic Visionary
My mouth will speak words of wisdom
my heart's utterance gives understanding
 
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If he is presenting himself as a gentleman, is she also presenting herself as a proper lady? I think so in this descriptive poem about the two. Oh the ways the opposite sex can portray themselves isn't always as it appears. It does seem these two have a nice potential though.

A different style for you, I'd say.

Jj


 Comment Written 03-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
    Hello JJ.
    Your beginning inquiry, and following comment is right on. Impression correct as to intent.
    So wise and perceptive your reflection that people are not always as they appear. Right again on
    the potential of these two. And yes, different style for me, thanks for mentioning it.
    Thank you with best wishes always. Ronni
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Joan E.
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I liked the parallel pattern of the poem and your comparisons between the two genders. The focus on the eyes and the heart is very effective, and the artwork reinforces the theme well. Cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
    Hello sweet Sunshine!
    Thanks dear, happy you enjoyed, and always intriguing comments.
    Take care, have a safe trip to Japan...your perpetual stow away prepares again...
    Love and hugs galore, Ronni

reply by Joan E. on 03-Nov-2015
    Thanks for your bon voyage. We are awaiting our flight at LAX and I'm glad to hear you've already stowed away!
    Big smiles, hugs and sunshine- Joan
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misscookie
 
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Like the artwork you posted to go with your poem. Your words are so true. This is what I call a food for thought poem... meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
    Thanks dear, happy you enjoyed it. You keep my spirits waltzing away, and bless
    you for your kind support. Love, Ronni

reply by misscookie on 03-Nov-2015
    You're more than welcome, thank you for those kind words.
    Cookie
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AnnaLinda
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Ronni,

I enjoyed reading your dual thoughts on the 'gentleman' and the
'intelligent' 'beautiful' gal. I particularly liked the entry lines...
"An intelligent man
will enhance your visions" That's the ideal...right?

and I also liked your ending..."will gently dance into your heart"

All very lovely thoughts penned in a beautiful way,
Linda


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
    Hui dear Linda,
    Thanks for your appreciations and comments on this dear!
    Always great to have you share your intriguing and thoughtful comments.
    Take care, keep smiling....and writing!
    Love always, Ronni
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Brett Matthew West
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The reference to a demurely smiling gal indicates she has the best chance of finding happiness is life.

However, it seems eye candy (beautiful gals) is what most men desire, even though that typically leads to nothing but heartache.

And, intelligent gals are usually perceived as threats to men. (For better or worse).

Stereotyping women is not the best way to find the one of your dreams.

But, it is, unfortunately, what most people do in sorting them out.


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
    Thank you Brett, for your most perceptive and reality relatable thoughts and comments.
    Sincerely appreciate you sharing with your kind visit. Best wishes always, Ronni
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Hello Ronni.
its a very nice and wonderful work you written.
Its very interesting and easy to understand.
I really enjoyed it.
Keep writing my friend.
Have a nice day to you.
gamay


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 03-Nov-2015
    Thanks so much for enjoying! Sometimes we overlook such key characteristics in people, yet
    sooner or later we find out they are important to notice or dwell on.
    Take care, and very best wishes, Ronni
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