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Light of the World


The reason for the season

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AnnaLinda
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amahra,

I love your antonym poem! Your form is really fine
and the theme and perfect message is conveyed in an
outstanding way. Your presentation is also
impressive...I like your bold font in beginning
and end.

Thank you for sharing this and well done,
Linda


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
    Thank you very much.
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acerisestory
 
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I very much like your Antonym Poem, Amahra.

Your use of "Light" and "Darkness" works well in this impactful poem. The enjambment you've used from one line to the next makes for a great flow of words.

Very well done. This is a strong entry for the contest. Best of luck! Alana


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016
    I didn't come close to winning, but thank you so much for this wonderful review.

reply by acerisestory on 01-Jan-2016
    The contests are very difficult, I think. So few people vote, and it's impossible to know who it will be from one contest to the next. No matter what, your poem was impressive. Take care. Alana

reply by Anonymous Member on 04-Jan-2016
    The contests are very difficult, I think. So few people vote, and it's impossible to know who it will be from one contest to the next. No matter what, your poem was impressive. Take care. Alana
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Joan E.
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Thank you for your timely, spiritual poem. I admired the contrast between the two words and your message. Happy holidays and best wishes in the contest- Joan


 Comment Written 14-Dec-2015



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    Thank you very much.
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Selina Stambi
 
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Loved this. Light and darkness - how powerful. A strong message in a few words.

Well done, Aunty Harriett!

Love,

Sonali (yes, it's me - Reachingforthestars - bless you!)


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
    Thank you, Selina.
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Curly Girly
 
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I enjoyed reading this clever little verse:
LIGHT
Entered the world through a humble virgin
And conquered the
DARKNESS
Best wishes in the contest.


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
    Nope, didn't win, not even close. LOL But thank you Curly.
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mauial
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Nice job with the antonym prompt of light vs dark. It is true what you state in the poem about Jesus. He himself said, "In the world you will have tribulation, but take courage! I have conquered the world." (John 16:33) He said that because the world ruler is dark for he said: "Now there is a judging of this world; now the ruler of this world will be cast out." (John 12:31)



 Comment Written 04-Dec-2015



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    thank you very much.
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suep
 
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Excellent antonym poem and great reminder of the true reason for the season. Inspiring and hope filled. Beautifully presented. Great work ... Best wishes in the contest! :)


 Comment Written 04-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
    thank you very much.
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Neonewman
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Wow! What a wonderfully spiritual piece of artwork you have chosen my friend! Does not compare to the masterfully crafted piece you have delivered.
God bless!
Steve


 Comment Written 04-Dec-2015



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    Thank you very much.

reply by Neonewman on 04-Dec-2015
    My Pleasure!

reply by Anonymous Member on 06-Dec-2015
    My Pleasure!
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Teri7
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You did a wonderful job with this beautiful poem. This is the time to feel blessed and honor our Lord. You used very good descriptive wording. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
    Thank you very much.
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Like the contrast of light vs. dark. It's what makes this poem. Read youe author notes and it explains the structure of this which reads very well. Flows smoothly. Good luck with the contest. Les


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 03-Dec-2015
    Than you so very much.
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