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With Our Secret Gifts

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crzypnter
 
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Dearest Ronni,
How lovely your poem speaks volumes to the nature of love. A very insightful, romantic poem.
Yes how we must dream that little dream. Job well done my friend truly deserving of the extra stars.
Marry Christmas God bless always

August


 Comment Written 24-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
    HELLO AUGUST,
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments and appreciation of this poem presentation dear friend!
    Great to have you peek in and share . Hope all is going well with you too. Have a beautiful
    Christmas and wonderfully blessed New Year!
    Love and blessings always, Ronni
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Oh, yes. Nicely done. ''The dream is you''
How more romantic, poetic, in love can one get? Bravo.

We go through life longing to be told such words.
Nicely done.
Have a good Christmas and an even better New year.
RGstar


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
    Thank you RG! Happy you enjoyed and shared with your enthusiastic and appreciative
    thoughts and comments! You aced the theme and thought perfectly, and I am truly
    grateful for your visit my friend. Have a spectacular Christmas, and very blissful
    New Year too! best wishes always, Ronni
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Nicelly flowing free verse with rhyme. It seems you have found what you were seeking and are showing people that they should seek the One that gave them the gifts that they have.

Happy Holidays.

Keep writing

dragonpoet


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
    You got it so right dragonpoet, and I thank you for your insightful thoughts and comments
    so kindly and warmly shared! Have a fantastic Christmas Holiday, and a most gloriously
    Happy New Year. Best wishes always, Ronni

reply by dragonpoet on 23-Dec-2015
    Glad I got your meaning. Your are so kindly welcome.

    Joan

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~Dovey
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Hi Ronni!

I really enjoyed the internal rhymes and flow of this piece. It tumbles down the page, each line perfectly unified with the next. It is a beautiful poem, sentimental and insightful. This was purely my pleasure to read and review. Thank you for sharing.

Kim


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
    Hi Dovey!
    Your pleasure and enjoyment of this is my higher reward and joyful appreciation of your enthusiastic
    thoughts and comments shared! Thank you for sharing with your most delightful visit!
    May you have a most joyous Christmas and gloriously Happy New Year!
    Blessings and best wishes, Ronni
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misscookie
 
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This is a very sensitive poem. One has to read it slow to get it's meaning.
I call this a food for thought poem. Meaning after you read t you go mm.
Cookie


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
    Hello sweetie
    Thanks for the kind words and appreciations of this poem, Happy you have
    the mmmmmm after effects...LOL...great to have your visit always...
    Love and blessings, Ronni

reply by misscookie on 23-Dec-2015
    You're very welcome and when you get them the really got me thinking too.
    Cookie
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MissMerri
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Awwww Ronni, this is so sweet, and such beautiful words to give to a true friend or lover. The flow and the musical quality here are both magical and spellbinding. The thoughts are so simple yet poetic and strong. I loved it all. (Your new picture is lovely! You look a lot like my cousin, Sherry.) Thanks for the sweetness. MM


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
    Hi Merri!
    Happy you enjoyed and shared with your sweet and delightful comments...been missing you!
    When you enjoy, I am especially pleased, means a lot to me dear friend. Have a spectacular
    Christmas, and a most sensationally blessed and Happy New Year....Love always, Ronni
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l.raven
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HI Ronni, this is so beautiful...I mean the wording , the picture, and your colors...stunning...each of us want that special someone...some one we can love inside...and out...very touching...and very nicely written...luff Linda xxoo...Merry Christmas to you and your family...


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
    Hi dear Linda!
    Such a lovely surprise and joy having you share your most appreciative and enthusiastic thoughts
    and comments on this poem! Your pleasure doubles my joys for sure dear!
    May you and yours have a most blessedly beautiful Christmas and preciously Happy
    and blissful New Year! Love and blessings, Ronni

reply by l.raven on 24-Dec-2015
    Hi Ronni, you are more than welcome...it is beautiful...have a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year...xxoo Linda
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AnnaLinda
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Ronni,

How refreshing your poem is! Short lines with powerful thoughts
and message. Love the overall theme of this so creatively formed
and rhymed. "Secret gifts" if only we believed that and shared them...
how much better the world would be.

A simply beautiful and profound poem presented with great
artistry and purple...haha one of my favs...Really, this is
exceptional and a saver for me.

Linda


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
    Thank you dear Linda,
    I am so pleased you enjoyed this theme and presentation of this
    poem, that is a special pleasure to note; ad we love the same
    color purple! Truly appreciate the extra star award dear!
    Thanks for all your lovely and gracious thoughts and comments shared.
    Happy you find it a keeper! Love and blessings, Ronni

reply by AnnaLinda on 22-Dec-2015
    You're welcome...my pleasure...well deserving!
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Poet looking for something he already had. Rhythm races showing desperation and seeking, always looking and never finding. Then, at last a revelation that what he was looking for he already had. Perhaps he will appreciate his lover more. liberty justice


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
    Hi there!
    I compliment you on your most insightful and thoughtful comments on this poem presentation,
    and you indeed interpreted , message and theme so perfectly. Thank you for your visit
    and kind sharing. Have a gorgeous Christmas and a fabulously Happy New year!
    Best wishes always, Ronni
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kittykatnoel
 
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Very well written poem. Beautiful and I really enjoy the rhythm of it. I am not sure what the style is technically called, but I really like it. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
    Hi dear!
    Thank you for your thoughtful and appreciative comments on this presentation. This is an excerpt from 'Letter
    and Diary" and thus not a typically structured poem or specific style. I am so pleased you liked it so well,
    and enjoyed it, that is an added reward and gratitude, and your kind compliments!
    May you and yours havea fantastic Christmas, and a most spectacularly Happy New Year.
    Very best wishes, Ronni
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