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United We Stand Divided We fall


The family must be there for each other no matter what.

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This is only part of what I sense is a very large
family. But family is indeed what keeps us whole and
it's in the family that we learn how to stay together.
All the best in the contest, Cookie. -Bill


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
    Thank you very much, it seems to be hard to keep a family together now a days. But I will not give up..
    Have a blessed evening
    Cookie
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Hi, Cookie

I'm sure your family benefits in many ways by your presence, your prayers and your guidance. This is a well-written contest entry for which I wish you good luck.

:) Bev


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
    Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments and kind words. With God's help I plant the seeds into them the rest is in there hands
    Cookie

reply by Writingfundimension on 15-Jan-2016
    You're very welcome, Cookie. That's, indeed, all anyone can do. God bless... Bev

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    Until next time.
    Cookie
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Hi Cookie,

Thanks for showing the pictures of your brothers children. All of them are very nice looking. What you wrote about them is nice too. Thanks very much for sharing.

Kat


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem, for your kind words and thoughtful comments.
    I'm please you like the poem.
    Have a nice day.
    Ccookie

reply by MizKat on 14-Jan-2016
    Time to get off here, my back is aching like crazy. Besides I'm hungry. Kat

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    I'm very proud of you, you're listening to your body and I'm getting off also.
    I just completed my Valentine Day poem I have time to turn in it
    Take care.
    Cookie
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Misscookie,
There is so much truth in that saying you used as your title: "United we stand, divided we fall" especially regarding our family.
That is a nice entry to the abc poetry contest you have written.
A lovely picture of your brother's children you have chosen to go with your poem.
Best wishes in the contest.

Blessings,
Anabella


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Thank you very much f;or taking time to read my poem, for your kind words and thoughtful comments.
    Cookie

reply by anabellapongasi on 14-Jan-2016
    You're welcome:)
    Anabella

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Take care.
    Cookie
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(Specialy) - those who go astray.

- should be: Specially with two L's


- also add a space at the end so the contest listing doesn't appear as part of you poem-

ABC Poetry Contest contest entry

Now, this is the most important part. Your poem is good, but unless you have it changed from the current 'prose' category to 'poetry' it will be AUTOMATICALLY disqualified.

Ask Tom to change it to poetry.

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016
    Thank you very much for bring those things to my attention.I correct the errors and ask Tom to help me with the change.
    Thank you very much.Have a nice evening.
    Cookie
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Great words for the ABC Contest.
You have a great looking family as well.
A Family does need to stand together as one for if not many may fall.
Great wisdom as always.
Good luck with the contest, I hope you have a pleasant day, during this cold snap.


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016
    Thank you very much for your kind words, and thoughtful comments
    Yes Baby it's COLD outside.















    Glad you like my poem
    I'm only going out there to go to the doctors. LOL
    Take care, Hugs and prayers.
    Grandma Cookie
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Hi Miss Cookie. What a wonderful and meaningful poem.
Yes, that's how a family is supposed to be. Thanks to you, your family is so close, in good and in worse. A wonderful and wise message and so well expressed.
Good luck in the contest. Fia


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016

    Thank you very much for taking time to read my poem, for your kind words and thoughtful comments.
    Until next time.
    Cookie
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Hello Cookie I really like your BBC entry for the contest about how families should stand up for each other.
Nice picture.
I like it.

Gert



 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016

    Thank you very much for taking time to read my poem, for your kind words and thoughtful comments.
    Until next time.
    Cookie

reply by Gert sherwood on 13-Jan-2016
    Smiles Cookie
    Gert

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    F/s had a problem and shut down. I'm not sure I answer this or not....I will keep smiling, take care.
    Cookie
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This a wonderful poem of its style and form. What a great looking family you have and the message in your poem expresses your deep love for each one of them. I will keep them in my prayers that their lives will be blessed and very prosperous.

Thank you for this excellent poem and may the good Lord bless you,,,,,Jim


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016
    Thank you very much for your kinds words. thoughtful comments and prayers for my family.I'm please you enjoyed the poem
    Cookie
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Love this: a timely word my lessen stress, but the LORD's word will heal and bless.
This is what comes to mind for me: The LORD thunders at the head of his army; his forces are beyond number, and mighty is the army that obeys his command. The day of the LORD is great; it is dreadful. Who can endure it? Even now," declares the LORD, "return to me with all your heart, with fasting and weeping and mourning."
Joel 2:11-12 The LORD will return someday, to claim His portion in the earth. He said: What kind of temple shall you build for me? Heaven is my Throne and earth is my Footstool.
Now as the Spirit leads us into truth, the LORD spoke of worry. He said: Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about itself. Each day has enough trouble of its own. Matthew 6:34, Each day on this earth we are tried in the fire, but with the armor of GOD, we are able to quench the darts of concern. So in achieving the inheritance of faith, we can move the mountains, and mow down the thoughts until our LORD has accomplished in us the reality of the gift of eternal life. Amen




 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016
    Thank you very much for your kinds words. thoughtful up lifting comments
    ake care and God be with you and yours.
    Cookie T
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