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Garden of Life


Journey through life

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As we wander through the garden of life We cross bridges of trouble and strife
This is truth and can be a little more inspired by the journey of life. Thank for sharing this piece.


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2016



reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
    Thank you for your kind words and excellent rating. Please stop again. Catherin

reply by chocoletdrop052 on 10-Mar-2016
    Hello, Catherin, Because I myself am planted in the vine, which is structured around the garden which is given for all to see. This poem touched the embers of what we experience here. Thanks for sharing
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Mary Wakeford
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Lovely poem and imagery to accompany it. You touch on the heart of home and life in general with this well formed, flowing rhyme. I thought you were speaking of your hometown of Florida, but then you threw me with the sea lapping the snow.
:) Well done.


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2016



reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
    Thank you for your kind words and excellent rating.Mary please note the line is "snow white beaches". I was thinking of the emerald coast where I live, but only because we have a lot of military couples and military widows who live in the area. Please stop by again. Catherin
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