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Inspired by Angelheart's art

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Comment by
May 1
 
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Wonderful description. I love the part about your universe being a treasure trove because it truly can be. Wow, it gets more and more beautiful as I read on. Quite an interesting ending. All in all, I enjoyed reading this poem.


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Hi May 1,
    Thank you for going back to read this poem. I only regret that Angelheart is no longer on FanArt. I loved her work, and it was her art that inspired this poem.
    Debi
Comment by
sunnilicious
 
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I understand how you took home the winning ribbon in this contest. Great visual imagery created. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Art is subjective due to personal perspectives, but every artist has an audience. Nice work.


 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much for the encouraging comments about the rhythm and rhymes, and the nice comment about winning the contest. I am sad to see that the artist Angelheart no longer is on FANART and so the beautiful artwork that went with the poem is no longer attached. She is very talented and I often used her artwork.
Comment by
Relda Halbert
 
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I am a closet-artist (not very good at all - but love doing it). I am amazed on two levels. Like you, the image is amazing. You chose well. I am also amazed at the journey you pen/painted. You 'stormed my castle door' and I'll be bringing out my sketch-pad and colored pencils tonight!

Very nice write and an absorbing read.

God bless and my best,

Relda


 Comment Written 04-May-2016



reply by the author on 17-May-2016
    Hi Relda,

    Now this is the type of review we all like to get--the poem made you want to do something! I am so happy to hear that your inner artist was activated and you have pulled out you sketch-pad.

    Thank you so much for the encouraging comments about the writing. I have to agree about the artwork. Angelheart does amazing work.

    Sorry for the delayed response. Life has thrown me a few crazy curves lately. I hope to be back to writing soon.

    Debi

reply by Relda Halbert on 22-May-2016
    Time! Crazy curves! - Hope things have slowed for you and those curves have straightened out. Looking forward to reading your work (old and new).

    Relda
Comment by
AnnaLinda
AnnaLinda (SweetLinda)
 
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Debi,

Congratulations on your winning poem!
Your poem and entry is superb. I enjoyed
all of your alliteration and rhymes.

Favorite lines:

"Imagination percolates
and opens wide your daunting gates.
Ideas burst forth and freely rove;
your universe--a treasure trove."

Really fantastic!

Linda



 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
    Hi Linda,

    Thank you so much for your congratulations. I've joined numerous contests and come in second or third a few time, but this is the first time I have won. Thank you for the comments about the alliteration and the rhymes, and for pointing out your favorite lines. I appreciate the encouragement.

    Debi

reply by AnnaLinda on 17-Apr-2016
    My pleasure!
Comment by
foxangie123
 
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Exceptional
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You deserved to win and thank you for entering and winning by all means. This is so very awesome. I didn't get to vote as I loved one is in Critical Care. Amazing....xo.....


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
    Hi, foxangie123.

    I am so sorry to hear that you have a loved one in Critical Care. That takes such an emotional and physical drain to deal with. I hope your loved one improves soon and recovers their health.

    Thank you so much for your kind comments about my entry, and the amazing six stars! Thank you for creating and sponsoring this contest. I love Angelheart's artwork, and entered to honor her. She is so amazing. I choose her artwork quite often to feature on my writing. As it turns out, this is the first contest I have won, and that came as a delightful surprise.

    Debi

reply by foxangie123 on 11-Apr-2016
    Thank you sweety...
Comment by
artisart4u
 
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I like your poem about art- colors, shapes and etc., all have a story to tell.

It rhymes well and I like the font. The picture is beautiful, of course, it came
from Angelheart. But important you took it a made a wonderful poem from it.

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
    Thank you for the beautiful six stars and the encouraging review. I appreciate your comments about the rhymes and the font. I couldn't agree more about Angelheart and her art. Thank you for the good luck wishes.
Comment by
Ben Colder
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I like this and will vote for it. The artist and sponsor are to be congratulated. You, poet should be recognized for a job well done.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
    Thank you for the support and encouraging comments. You made me smile . I am so pleased that you liked my poem and appreciate you stopping by.
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Liberty Justice
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So filled with metaphors of beautiful tribute to artists and their electrifying work. Artists paint world as they see its lovely design so amazing. TELL me who you are after contest ends. liberty justice


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
    Hi Liberty Justice,

    Thank you for the wonderful review and your delightful insights on the writing. I am delighted that you liked the poem. Thank you for the kind comments about the metaphors. And how nice of you to ask who I am. That just makes my day so much brighter. Since the contest is over you probably already know, but I write on FS as w.j.debi. I haven't been around much this year because work has been so crazy. In fact, this makes poem number six for the year. I dropped by to do a few reviews and saw Angelheart's name. I love her work so I had to write something for the contest just to let her know I appreciate her artwork.

    Debi

reply by Liberty Justice on 12-Apr-2016
    Stop by my portfolio a while.
    thank you.
Comment by
Kazzawin
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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Absolutely loved this!
What a cracking entry to the contest and a wonderful accolade to the artist.
You have managed to describe perfectly how art can draw one in or totally confuse. I love the first two lines of the first stanza...brilliant!
I hope you do well in the contest.
P.S. Gorgeous choice of artwork too!


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Thank you for the amazing six star rating! I am so pleased that you loved this poem. I appreciate the encouragement and the good luck wishes. Thank you!
Comment by
Sandra du Plessis
 
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When you need an expression on you poem the way to go is on abstract art of the best creative inventive artists who never disappoints.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    You are so right. You can never go wrong by selecting a piece of artwork done by Angelheart. She is amazing. Thank you for the stopping in to read and review.
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