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Julia.
 
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So here I am, making good on my promise to review something of yours. This was the most current piece I found. Sounds like you getting a bit jaded back in April :) I don't blame you. Seems like contests--other than site sponsored ones--and entries are getting pretty scarce. What happened? I've been gone for a few months, but even before I left it was still pretty hopping.


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016
    LOL...LOL....LOL. This is a review of somethoing that old???? why wouldn't you givre me the sam ecourtesy of reviewing my most current post which is in my profile plaain as day. It's a chapter of my ongoing book called "The Runaway" I don't understand. If yopu jus don't weant to take the time to read prose just don't review me. Thank you. Bob

reply by Julia. on 27-Aug-2016
    I don't know what you are talking about. When I look at your Profile Page *and* your Portfolio, it shows this poem as the top (most recent) item. Then next thing down--"His Name is Joe"--is from 2014.

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016
    That is because you are not signed up as a fan of mine.....as I am your fan. If you were It would show you my "latest" post. "The Runaway" Don't weorry about it. thanks anyway. The only other way to get it is to go to my portfolio under books and select chapter number 18 as it is a revived post. sorry. Bob

reply by Julia. on 27-Aug-2016
    Yes, I was signed up as a fan of yours until about 30 seconds ago. I don't know why FS is not showing your posts properly to me. Maybe it's because it's an older post that has been revived, so FS doesn't sort that to the top of the portfolio. I'll look for The Runaway tomorrow.

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016
    Nope. that's not the reason. All of my other fns get the message just as I get them for you. wheather it is a revived or not doesn't matter at all. sorry as I said. don't worry about it. My apologies. Bob.
Comment by
Susanne M. Psyris
 
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If you were going for boring and humdrum, as your notes indicated, you succeeded by far! lol...I am anxious to try this one. I think I can be very boring at times, now, just to capture it in 17 short syllables! God bless and hugs, Susanne


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016
    LOL..I just did this for the heck of it. I haven't entered any contests in years here on Fs. and bingo! I won! couildn't believe it. LOL...


reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 06-Jul-2016
    Congrats on your win!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 06-Jul-2016
    Congrats on your win!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 06-Jul-2016
    Congrats on your win!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 06-Jul-2016
    Congrats on your win!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 06-Jul-2016
    Congrats on your win!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 06-Jul-2016
    Congrats on your win!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 06-Jul-2016
    Congrats on your win!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016
    Thank you, my friend.

Comment by
vwilks
 
 
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Hey Mastery -- short and sweet.
You have dubbed yourself the master and I can see why. Without much effort at all you are able to put together a short, plain, winning piece. So glad to have you as a fan. Please never quit writing. You're definitely a master at it. -- Congrats!!!


 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
    Hi, Vemell. LOL.. I did not choose that name Mastery for any reason in particular just for the record. Go to my profile page and look about half way down to the explanation...then come back and tell me what you think, my friend. LOL...:) Thanks so much for ther review though. It was just for the heck of it I even got into tht contest. Blessings.

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Winslow
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Dear Mastery,

LOL. I guess you won your own contest. I tried reading this but halfway through I started yawning. I took a nap and then finished it. Congratulations on winning.

Warm regards,

Winslow


 Comment Written 02-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
    LOL. I have no idea what you are talking about, my friend. Domino2 originated this contest. Im jumped in just for the hell of it. Haven't written a poem in eight years or so. and I won!!! Go figure??? But please.....please don't infer that it was MY contest. Get your facts straight Winslow....Okay? Bob
Comment by
mountainwriter49
 
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Hi, Bob,

I've missed a lot of reading and reviewing due to my teaching; however, I'm glad to find this one in your portfolio today. So sorry I missed it when posted.

And congratulations for taking the blue ribbon in the contest!

I liked the tone of the poem and line two made me laugh out loud. Line 3 is one of life's truisms when a poet posts his work.

A fun poem and so glad this won. A contest winner deserves a yellow star!

-Ray


 Comment Written 22-May-2016



reply by the author on 23-May-2016
    Thanks so much, Ray. Yeah, I haven't done much in a while...I think I have pnuemonia again. checking tomorrow. thanks form the reviewe of this piece. Blessings, my friend.
Comment by
chcbeck
 
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Not used to seeing you write poetry so had to comment on your great win . I am spending some time reviewing your work as promised. All the best Clare.


 Comment Written 02-May-2016



reply by the author on 13-May-2016
    Hi, clare. Yeah this contest was so easy. I couldn't resist asnd won 95.00 for my time. LOL.
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2016 Poet Of The Year
Dean Kuch
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Looks like a contest winner to me, Bob. Unless my eyes are deceiving me, of course, which they have been known to do on occasion, heh-heh-heh...

Congrats on yer win, buddy!

~Dean photo 4_17_51_zpswnoawaso.gif


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
    Thanks, DeanO. Yeah. I thought you knew. I won 95.00 on that one...it was a joke and fun to do. LOL...Bob (I'm surprised you weren't notified of my posting it??? Bob

reply by Dean Kuch on 29-Apr-2016
    Nope. I saw that I'd never reviewed it while snooping around your portfolio as I sometimes do my favorite authors here (you know...just in case they've entered a blind contest or something?), so I said, "Why not now? better late than never."
    ~Dean

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
    What did you think? LOL...did you see the sign at the door that said "Dumbass lives here" Bob

reply by Dean Kuch on 30-Apr-2016
    If I had seen that sign, then I woulda been lookin' at my own front door, lol... :)
Comment by
ann marie mazz
 
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bob bob bob

I am so smiling right now
thank you for that

first
I hope this day finds you well
I've been away for awhile

I turned to your page and find you have a winning entry with poetry

a million congratulations for that

I very much enjoyed the title
your words never strayed
well done with the 5-7-5

sorry I missed the celebration
thank you for sharing with us
I hope you had fun with the creation
now about that pride (ha ha)

stay well
ann marie


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
    Hi, Ana Marie. I have had chapters for my new book up for the past few months though. (Not poetry of course) I am rather proud of those. LOL...Bob
Comment by
amahra
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What? Mastery writing poetry. I didn't check to see if it were a contest, but I suppose it was. I liked it. Thought you did a nice job since it was out of your gentry. Good job, Bob.


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
    Thanks so much, Harriett. I appreciate you and the encouragement, It was a lark...I won btw and made 95.00 in the process. LOL...(I used to write a lot of poetry and winning stuff too...see my portfo;io for shock....LOL) Bob
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evilynne
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Sounds interesting but I'm way behind in reviewing and am probably too late to enter the contest. So I'll pass on this one. Evi


 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016



reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016
    I won 95.00 member dollars for this lark, Evi.. :) Bob

reply by evilynne on 16-Apr-2016
    Good for you! Evi
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