Beautiful! I felt like taking a deep breath in and exhaling relaxation. Not easy to do in so few words and lines. Did you mean dasied or daisy'd grass? I was confused by that but still very much amused by the vision! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
Thank you so much for your encouraging review. I have corrected the daisy section.