Love Bites Write a poem about love gone wrong or lost love. It can be sad, raw, or just plain angry (Just keep it clean). Express the emotions of the darker side of love. Any style or length. Be creative.
I decided to back track to the first chapter. It was a pleasant surprise to learn how the Lady's disappearance came to be. And to learn of Lara's loyalty. I liked the way you kept bringing her back to the cabin, even without heat it provided shelter. Good first chapter, thank you.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
Thank you for your 'excellent' rating and your kind review. Do come again. Catherin
Great job Catherine on this piece of artwork! I will give 5 stars!
The part I love the most in this is how you started it at the beginning I find it captivating. From the opening "once upon a time..." to the
Ending with "This is her story penned in her own style."
Comment Written 22-May-2016
reply by the author on 22-May-2016
WOW! Thank you for your kind words and the "Excellent" rating. Thank you for stopping by; please do so again. Catherin