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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Search"

The lady's escape becomes a countrywide search

  3 total reviews 
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aryr
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I decided to back track to the first chapter. It was a pleasant surprise to learn how the Lady's disappearance came to be. And to learn of Lara's loyalty. I liked the way you kept bringing her back to the cabin, even without heat it provided shelter. Good first chapter, thank you.


 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016



reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
    Thank you for your 'excellent' rating and your kind review. Do come again. Catherin

reply by aryr on 06-Jun-2016
    you are most welcome
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Great job Catherine on this piece of artwork! I will give 5 stars!
The part I love the most in this is how you started it at the beginning I find it captivating. From the opening "once upon a time..." to the
Ending with "This is her story penned in her own style."


 Comment Written 22-May-2016



reply by the author on 22-May-2016
    WOW! Thank you for your kind words and the "Excellent" rating. Thank you for stopping by; please do so again. Catherin
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Hi Catherin, this truly is a beautifully written tale of the lonely lady who has obviously married for wealth and not love, It reminded me of the Eagles song 'Lying Eyes'.

The description and imagery you use is exquisite and the story line excellent, I look forward to reading more my friend.


 Comment Written 22-May-2016



reply by the author on 22-May-2016
    Thank you for your very kind words and "Excellent" rating. It will be my pleasure to see if I can keep the intrigue progressing. Eric1, thanks for stopping by.

reply by Eric1 on 22-May-2016
    You are most welcome my friend.
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