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Sparkles


Mature Adults still shine.

  2 total reviews 
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dragonpoet
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Good use of images and enjambment to get your point across. The elder can have just as much zest and fire as the young. They know more and can really understand the meaning of patriotism on July 4th.

The picture matches the words well.

Keep writing

dragonpoet



 Comment Written 22-May-2016



reply by the author on 22-May-2016
    Thank you for your kind words, the "Excellent" rating and astute observation. Do stop by again soon.

reply by dragonpoet on 23-May-2016
    You're welcome on all accounts.

    dragonpoet
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bichonfrisegirl
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This is a priceless poem. An original premise that you brought to life in your well thought out and presented poem. It doesn't matter how old one is, they can still have their great memories to bring a spark back into their life. Both your poem and picture pair perfectly together. I loved "now quietly snickering" ... lol ... if only everyone knew what all she had been up to in her youth! :) Your title "Sparkles" is great!

Well done! I really enjoyed reading this!

Connie


 Comment Written 22-May-2016



reply by the author on 22-May-2016
    Thank you for your very kind words and your "Excellent" rating. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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