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Double Acrostic/Cleave-Contest Entry

  24 total reviews 
Comment by
Stephanie Joulin
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Exceptional
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This is amazing. This is the first time i have seen this style of writing and I absolutely love it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. I am not religious, I am spiritual; I did not detect any specific religion in this text.


 Comment Written 01-May-2019


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maccapool34
 
 
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Bravo....I read the poem the first time together and enjoyed the rhyme sense to it. However am new to that acrostic technique but found the style very interesting and particularly the cross over from negative thinking to positive thinking by the nature of God. A touching sentiment..... excellent job!


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019


Comment by
gudbjorg
 
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This is a beautiful poem with a very good message that brings out the human side of things vs how God sees things. The poem is very well composed and is very impressive. The contrast in the colours compliment the poem. A great poem where the light of God destroys the darkness. "Nothing left but to bow down and pray." I like to say: "Prayer is powerful and when we pray things will happen and things will be done. God answers our prayers." Well done.


 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018


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Honey Bee Jean
 
 
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So beautifully composed! I love the way darkness is portayed here. Almost as if to say that the darkness is required in order for the light to exist. "Only what lies inside climbs the ladder" such a captivating line. Thank you for sharing!


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018


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Teri7
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Michael, This is a very beautiful double acrostic poem you have penned for the contest. You used exceptional wording and great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Am going to book case this! Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017


Comment by
Ric Myworld
 
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Exceptional
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I don't give many of my measly stash of sixes for poetry of any kind except for the few that I just can't hold back from. I definitely don't know why or the particulars of any form of poetry, but I'm not so dumb that I can't give praise to those that smack me upside my silly head or ring melodious in my nearly deafened ears. Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems, and good luck in the contest. :-)


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016


Comment by
Ima L. Ami
 
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This is one of the most beautiful religious poems I have ever read! I love how the two can be read individually or combined. This truly reflects the relationship between God and Man. Apart, they are both strong, but together, abslolutely amazing!!! I don't give six stars often, but this is deserving of ten! Great work, Mikey :)


 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    Gee. I'm really stunned by your response, Suzanne. I'm delighted you enjoyed this as I did spend a lot of time with it and was hoping it might resonate with a few people. I couldn't be happier that you are one of them as I admire your skills and keen intellect. Thanks a million. Big smiles. :)) mikey

reply by Ima L. Ami on 09-Jul-2016
    You're very welcome!
Comment by
Rubylou
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Wow!
Your determination and hard work is certainly evident in this magnificent piece.
I have to say the cleave poem is a new concept for me.
What a great model to read and learn from.
I like the weaving of the two colors. They lend to two separate thoughts when reading them individually
Also they don't distract when reading as one poem.

Yours is a strong message and to my thinking, applicable to all.

Great job, Mikey
Rubylou


 Comment Written 04-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
    Wow. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this so much. I was hoping the colours and all would make it easier to separate the two pieces. The font had to be so small because of the new format. So glad you could read it and more delighted you understood and liked it. Thanks soooo much. I can't stop smiling. mikey
Comment by
brenda bickers
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Exceptional
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Hi Mikey,
this really is a great poem or should I say trilogy. You really have mastered this well. I always feel a great sense if achievement when I do a cleave. I feel I have really worked for it.
Really great poem.
Brenda:))x


 Comment Written 04-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
    I admit, I did actually bust a little tail to do this one. Every once in a while I do something complex just to prove I can do more than ramble away. LOL
    I'm so thrilled you enjoyed and found it to your liking. Thanks a million. mikey
Comment by
dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Keep right on
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  Rank:  30
 
Exceptional
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Cleave poems are so very difficult to do and do well as yours is. Read all three ways this is a great poem(s). This could be a challenge (not really, I hate to think what I could do in an hour). I have a policy of not giving sixes on Sunday, but this just has to have one. Great work here, my friend~Debbie


 Comment Written 03-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 04-Jul-2016
    Whew. That would be a challenge, indeed. This took me a while. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks for the six and wonderful review. mikey
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