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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "A Secret Journey"

The lady's escape becomes a countrywide search

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Juliette Chamberlain
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Interesting story line which makes me want to understand more about the background.
What has made Lady Lenore decide to live in a cave rather than a castle?
You develop the story well.


'...the (bowls) bowels of the earth...'
'Devonshire.' All one word.



Warmly,

Juliette


 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
    Thank you for your kind words and the excellent rating. Suggested editing will be done.
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Stories about castles, kings, queens, prince and princess are always magical and will attract any readers curiosity like you did here. The adventures and fantastic scenes or episodes will be looked forward to by the expectant readers. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016
    Thank you for your kind words and your excellent rating.
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