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A Wild-Land Firefighter


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  3 total reviews 
Comment by
Susanne M. Psyris
 
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Nice free-verse poem. As for an entry into the "The Life He Almost Lived" contest, it seems you have written about the life you DID live. Great job on the piece; storyline is very interesting. It's a heroic job that demands respect of those doing it. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne


 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
    Thank you yes I can say I did live that life, I would not changed it for anything. It was job I woke up for each day to just see what would come my way that day. I loved living outdoors and in small towns, that is why I live in one now. we have about 850 people here. but go 60 miles e w s n=e we have bigger towns cities.
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lfemine
 
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That's a very nice tribute to firefighters and a sweet surprise end. I can see a great purpose here and you express it well. However, there are some grammar and punctuation errors which distract from it. See if you can fix those.


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
    I always keep going back working them. I know my grammar is weak but I am working that also. thank you for your help.

reply by lfemine on 27-Jun-2016
    Your very welcome :)
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William Ross
 
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very good , nicely written free verse, nice tribute to the fallen fire fighters, fighting the wild fires. And thanks for your service in doing this. good luck on this and have a great day


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    thank you and you have great day also. GB
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