Very well written memoir. I enjoyed it and the gentle memories greatly. If I have any suggestion, it is that you delete the comma in
To the Husking Bee where boys, gather .... as it is redundant and impedes the flow just a little. Also, you have used the words taste more than once and boy more than once very close together. Perhaps synonyms might be better?
Well done, though!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
Thank you for your kind words and excellent rating! I will address the items you mentioned. Thank you