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A gentle reminder of joys past

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it makes me want to go get some hot apple pie and a cup of hot cider to take the chill off the bones maybe some roasted chestnuts roasting on the fire


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    Thank you for your kind comments and the excellent rating. Do stop by again.
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Very well written memoir. I enjoyed it and the gentle memories greatly. If I have any suggestion, it is that you delete the comma in
To the Husking Bee where boys, gather .... as it is redundant and impedes the flow just a little. Also, you have used the words taste more than once and boy more than once very close together. Perhaps synonyms might be better?
Well done, though!


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
    Thank you for your kind words and excellent rating! I will address the items you mentioned. Thank you
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very nice description of many wonderful times and tastes and sounds that we need to remember. Fall is beautiful and it is a great time to enjoy the taste of apples and the memories we all share.


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    Thank you for your kind words and the excellent rating. Do stop by again.
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