The time of my life: Write a short story. The topic is: The best time you ever had in your life. It can be as an adult or as a child. Please keep it clean. Minimum length 100 words. Maximum Length 4,000 words.
This sounds like a lovely medieval romance piece, possibly in the Gothic style. High drama, a damsel distress, a ready hero... ou have all the elements.However, I think there is some confusion in voicing. Sometimes first person I is your hero, sometimes it becomes the heroine. This makes for a slight discord in understanding that I am sure is relatively minor to fix.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Thanks Hayley for your constructive comments and excellent rating. Please stop by again soon.