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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Return to the cave"

The lady's escape becomes a countrywide search

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Comment by
Nika2016
 
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Interesting story. Rather than die, I think he wants her to change identities...leaving all behind.
I felt it was too short..
The reader wants more.
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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
    Thanks Nika for your comments and your excellent rating. Please stop by again soon.
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Hayley Solomon
 
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This sounds like a lovely medieval romance piece, possibly in the Gothic style. High drama, a damsel distress, a ready hero... ou have all the elements.However, I think there is some confusion in voicing. Sometimes first person I is your hero, sometimes it becomes the heroine. This makes for a slight discord in understanding that I am sure is relatively minor to fix.


 Comment Written 25-Jul-2016



reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
    Thanks Hayley for your constructive comments and excellent rating. Please stop by again soon.
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