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All Is Lost


How one good friend went about losing it.

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This is a sad poem and reminds me of the song by Elton John, that's why they call it the blues. A man who has learnt from his mistakes is a wise man indeed. Thank you for sharing.


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"All is Lost'
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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This is how it happens for many as they make a series of bad choices, their lives unravel. IT is a bit humorous, but far too often true. Well written, my friend~Debbie


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you have got such a way about writing poetry. So simple yet such great writing. How many years have you written poetry? 75? It's fun to read. Keep up the good work.


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You could make a million dollars writing country music. This has it all, the runaway wife, the wrecked car(I'm thinking you should make it a pickup truck, but then what would you rhyme with it?) and the affair. Just buy a guitar and set it to music and you've got it made. Good luck.


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I'm glad this isn't about you, Jay, but I loved the poem. It's a jaunty one, the rhyme and rhythm are spot on, and made for such an enjoyable read. I would imagine a few people would be nodding their heads at your poem, knowing someone, or even themselves who have gone through this. Well done, sad though it is, I really enjoyed it. :)) Sandra xxx


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Great job Jay on this eloquently written verse. I can see how your observations of the life of another person can lead you to writing from this perspective. Well done.

melissa


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I too am an unrepentant rhyme and rhythm poet and enjoyed your "woe is me" piece. Sorry to say, I know more than one person who could have written the same words (though probably not as cleverly). Thanks for the read. - Wendy


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I like how you made this poem into a sad story. It looks as if this person really is a sadist. Excellent work! I like your poem. No mistakes found in this poem. Thanks for sharing!


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I read the poem first without reading the notes and was in quick shock
What a relief to find it was about someone else. I really enjoy the simplicity and metering of your poetry- you tell a little story or give a little life lesson-always a treat to read

All the Best
Phil


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