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a spiritual poem

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Beautiful artwork and verse! This is a good summation of what is going on in the world right now. You are right, it's definitely testing our faith.


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much MelB!!!!!

reply by MelB on 23-Aug-2016
    You're most welcome.
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Yes, what God has given us that is real, and what he has made for us we should realize that what is too our real hope, not all the other stuff that we are living with too, as good rules over evil ways of man or the human race... or we would have been doomed by now it would seem to me...and gone a long time ago. And, though, pray we must all do, and ask our God, Our Lord...to help us live through so much hate, realizing then,,, His Goodness still prevails and to let His light shine through us....to that our neighbor, and those around us in faith and good works all of our days.

Thanks for sharing...Caressa_08


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much Miss Caressa!!!!
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Teresa Shortess
 
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This is a very good and uplifting poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much. Teri


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much Teri!!!!
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I like the contrasts here, the interplay once again between good and bad, darkness and light.
With your write we find hope amidst whatever evil is presented to us, by default or with will.

Lovely image to back your theme.

My best wishes,
RGstar


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much!!!!
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I do not know how to review this poem. I like the theme...but something is missing to bring the feelings behind the words forward. But I love this...

"For truth will triumph, though it's thought a lie"


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much....
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Excellent Poem! I really loved your poem. The author's words are clear, filled with hope and creative. The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork
is perfect and compliments the theme and words of this poem.


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much!!!
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c_lucas
 
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God promises to be with us always and to never desert us. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much!!!
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The real things, the meaningful mercies of life and the kindness of strangers is still out there, but harder to find. Yet, if we believe they no longer exist--drowned out by noise and ill-intent--we lose purpose. Keep the faith.


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
    Thank you very much!!!!!
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Is reason lost, morality a dream? ...To answer your question quite simply; yes, in my opinion it has been and still is today...

For truth will triumph, though it's thought a lie,

as evil reigns, we know it cannot win,
... No, evil cannot win the war, it's true. But it certainly can and does win its share of battles along the way...

Irish Rain, yours is a well composed sonnet with a hopeful message that all will be right with the world.
And it will, once all God's children are in paradise, with Him.
Until that time, e-h-h-hhhhh...keep clinging to that hope...

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
    Exactly....until then....eat that desert first!!!! Thank you so much Mr. Dean!!!!!!

reply by Dean Kuch on 22-Aug-2016
    My pleasure, Miss Irish.
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TAB_that's me
 
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Amen, my friend! Truth will triumph - yes indeed (and good alliteration:)

God is real and He does not chance - not ever.

Teresa


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much Miss Teresa!!!!
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