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The Devil's Skin


Stranger danger...

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Comment by
Mark Hudson
 
 
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this was incredibly disturbing, but you made a good point, and it hit home. yes, I think you are right, we are in a supernatural battle between good and evil, right and wrong. Thanks for the reminder. i'm glad it's Sunday, so I can go to church! what a scary poem and story.

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 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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reply by Mark Hudson on 29-Aug-2016
    yes, i am new, so sorry if you were offended by my review. I suppose the three stars was not on your "presentation" but the topic itself i found the whole thing shocking disturbing which was the point.
    It is like watching the 7:00 news, after a while, how do you react? I apologize if i judged too quickly, and yes, i am a rookie, bare with me

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
    We aren't supposed to give stars based upon personal choices in genre. We are supposed to give reviews based upon the quality if work, i.e., grammar, punctuation, form, etc.
    I realized you were new so I was kind.
    I'm not always kind...
    ~Dean
Comment by
Maria Jose Garcia
 
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This is definitely not sappy and will indeed elicit a shiver. You've chosen a very serious topic. Very interesting.
I recently saw a Louis Theroux documentary about Coalinga, a mental institution in California where all the inmates are pedophiles. I do recommend it.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
    I'll be sure to check it out.
    Thanks for your comments.
    ~Dean
Comment by
DR DIP
 
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I have no time for the rehabilitation of child sex offenders and pedophiles either incarcerate them and castrate them cut out their testicles make them wear a tatoo saying I am a pedo phile. This is poignantly written in sometimes double rhyme line as I call it You have wonderful combinations and the flow of the poem and its accompanying audio is always perfect and eerie and fkg scary!!

thanks for sharing

dipster


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


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danpald
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It is good to have a muse
Filled with such vision
Giving forth the truth
That it is not from heaven

That your poems are of this type
The theme of sordid likes
Does find it charming
That there is deep meaning

To warn the many here
That such fears are real
The perverts are so many
Especially who victimize the child

Keep giving forth this vision
That has the message given
For so too many abuse
We need to know the truth

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
    Thanks, Dan.
    ~Dean
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Bill Schott
 
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This poem has all your usual attributes displayed, Dean, but then moves to the real monsters that can't be simply forgotten by turning a page. I wonder whether your goal was this or if the theme turned to that in the middle of other, comparatively less scary situations llike ghouls, zombies, and ghosts.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


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Thomas Bowling
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Yours are the only posts tired over and over. I'm speed reader, but when I want something to sink i I read it slow. It takes me a long time to read your stuff. Damn, now I'm ate for work.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


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