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The Devil's Skin


Stranger danger...

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I like this poet especially the terrifying humour about ghosts been cool I consider this as a genius way of expressing art


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
    Thanks very much for taking the time to read and comment, shining star.
    I appreciate it as always.
    ~Dean

reply by the shining star on 29-Aug-2016
    you are welcome
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Your rhymes are sophisticated and you alliteration brilliant. I am not a fan of this, your only, genre, but I always read and admire your talent with our complex language.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
    Thanks very much for taking the time to read and comment, Allister.
    I appreciate it as always.
    ~Dean

reply by Pyrrho on 29-Aug-2016
    Cheers
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than you were yesterday.
 
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Yes, I can understand that. Vampires and Ghosts may scare a little but there is no greater evil than that on man, because when you write about that, every reader knows that a of evil lives within them as well. Well written.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016

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In Hebrew hamlets women ground grain on little hand millstones. There was also a big village mill, a massive stone turned by a donkey. Some documents say the offender should have an ass stone tied around his neck. No wonder translators scratch their heads...rambling again. Miko treed my laptop when the sound effects began. Excellent post, Dean.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
    Thanks very much for taking the time to read and comment, Red.
    I appreciate it as always.
    ~Dean
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Totally agree. There are few real life monsters worse than child abusers.

All of which should be rounded up and eliminated in the most excruciating manner possible.

That would not be too good for them considering how they harm children.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
    Thanks very much for reading, Brett.
    Much obliged.
    ~Dean
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Joy Graham
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I'm always amazed at your growing poetic abilities :) While horror isn't my favorite, it's what I expect from you. Nobody does shock and horror quite like you lol! It's fantastic that you are still able to push the envelope and exceed your own personal bests!

I'm glad you mentioned in your author notes about child abuse.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
    Thanks very much for taking the time to read and comment, Joy.
    I appreciate it as always.
    ~Dean
Comment by
RoostyNester
 
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I agree with you. No child molester should ever be allowed to be free. When a sick mind has reached the point of destroying children, they are beyond help. Only God can help a soul that has stooped that low into corruption. Your poem reveals what is happening in our country. I loved it and felt it gives a deep insight to what real corruption really is. Those wearing the devil's skin.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016

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Jessielee22
 
 
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The rhymes were spectacular and the flow was perfect. I really enjoyed this one, the "monsters" being child molesters adds a dark scary aspect and shines a light on a real world monster. I too have very little forgiveness, if any at all, for those that use and abuse children. Great job as usual!


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016

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Rehabilitate My Arse! They deserve no pity. They had none for the victims of their evil perverted deeds. They should be locked away in a dungeon with the cries of children their only contact 24/7. They should never be released back into society again. Disgusting animals that they are. Nancy


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
    Thanks very much for taking the time to read and comment, nancy.
    I appreciate it as always.
    ~Dean
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It is hard to understand what drives these kinds of people. There is an uncontrolled monster inside of them. We all have our ticks but most don't involve hurting another human being. Great job. Gretchen


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
    Thanks very much for taking the time to read and comment, Gretchen.
    I appreciate it as always.
    ~Dean
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