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Comment by
ioana.u
 
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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
The perfect ending to this incredible story! Ben and Galloway meet their match made in hell!
I loved how you closed things back at home before following the twisted inhabitants of Ben's mind on the road.
"You're not just time that I'm killin'" - no kidding!
"Ben turned his head while Galloway smiled, looking out the window" - perfect description of their symbiosis!
Thank you for an amazing story! I really am sorry it's over...
Ioana


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
    Dear, Ioana.
    I should thank you for being such an invaluable reviewer. Your lovely words kept me going and wanting to make the story better and better.
    I'm glad you like this 'perfect ending'.
    And you even see how the song is meaningful. (I don't think everyone bothers to see the significance.) You are a marvelous reader who realizes that every word IS important.

    We thank you for the six stars. Ben, Galloway and all the cast bow to you.

    :) ellen xxx

reply by ioana.u on 12-Sep-2016
    Thank you so much, your words really mean a lot! I can't wait for your stories to be posted, you know how to take the reader out of reality and that's my favourite kind of writing.
    Biiig fan!
Comment by
Ric Myworld
 
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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Chapters don't get any better than this one, gives me one of those old nauseous feelings deep in my stomach, just knowing something dreadful is about to happen, but not knowing exactly what, or who to. Great job. :-)


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
    Hi, Ric.
    I'm sure your imagination can take you there. I've given you the characters and their motivations. haha
    Thank you for your generous six stars and following Ben's story.

    :) ellen
Comment by
lancellot
 
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Hmm, is this partial ending meant to say that Ben got picked up by two people crazier than he is and perhaps some sort of poetic justice will take place? This was an interesting story.

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
    Yes.
    Thank you for your review.
    :) ellen
Comment by
Cumbrianlass
 
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I've been waiting for this. Not disappointed. I just knew there would be an unconventional ending, because, well, it's you writing the story! LOVE that you've left it open. You could pick this up and go anywhere with it. Evil country singer meets evil moon-pie scoffing girl by the sound of it.

Excellent!

Had an email natter with Tina earlier today! She hinting she might be back writing this fall. I hope so!

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
    Thank you for your review.
    My son thinks that I should extend it in the future. We'll see.

    Great to hear Tina might be coming back. Yea!

    :) ellen
Comment by
ciliverde
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  Rank:  513
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Wow, Ellen, you are notching it up here! Sounds like the Simms' have some strange deal going on at the farm, and they've got some pretty strange bait here in the truck with Ben/Galloway. Which psychopath will win in the end? It will be a strange contest and I can hardly wait!!!
Carol


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
    Thank you so much, Carol.
    I may extend this but not right away. I'm fairly exhausted just planning this section. haha

    I really appreciate your six stars.

    Hugs,
    :) ellen xxx
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