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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Fashionista Witches"

Poems fun and scary

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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Halloween poem. Those two witches on the picture really look freaky. The way they spend each day, blending in with other shoppers, no one will guess how they spend their nights.


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
    Hi Sandra. My kids' favorite holiday is Halloween. Figured it was time for mom to get in the 'spirit' of things, too. Thank you for reading and reviewing this one. To tell you the truth I'd think they were 'freaky' too if I saw them while I was shopping. Marilyn
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That picture scares me. The poem is dripping with excellent visual imagery. I've never truly been a fan of tacos. Creative. Inventive. Great flow of rhythm and rhymes. Well thought out and nicely written.


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
    Hi Alicia--not a fan of tacos? I love tacos but would draw the line at toad tacos. Of course, witches like them. LOL! Thank you for reading and reviewing this one. Marilyn
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So witches engage in retail therapy too! Neat picture in keeping with the season!! I relished your mono-verse rhymes and am looking forward to those "toad taco-melts" coming soon to a catering truck in my neighborhood!!! I wouldn't mind jumping the "moon" either!!!! Thanks for the fun- Joan


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
    Hi Joan. Thank you for your fun review. More to come. How you doing? Next senryu? :) Marilyn

reply by Joan E. on 14-Oct-2016
    After eight years on FanStory, I learned to pace myself and usually only post one poem per week, although I try to review every day. I don't know yet what the "spirit" will move me to share! Sweet dreams- Joan

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
    Yes, I noticed you post about once a week, sometimes twice. I always enjoy your work very much. I'm going to be painting my kitchen this week, so we'll see how that goes with posting. I want to get my witchy poems posted before Halloween, though.

reply by Joan E. on 14-Oct-2016
    A artist, painting walls--that should prove interesting. You'll have to take breaks, when you can post more witchy poems. See ya soon! -Joan

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
    Hi Joan. I painted 1/3 of the kitchen today and will piecemeal it rather than push myself to do it all at once. I'm sort of a 'chipper-awayer'--a little of this and a little of that. Keeps me from getting bored. :)

reply by Joan E. on 14-Oct-2016
    Good for you to not push too hard and also keep from getting bored. Best wishes with the final result- Joan

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
    You will probably get a kick out of this, Joan. When I bought the house in 2013 (a ranch) the kitchen colors were deep red on two walls and egg yolk yellow on two walls. I knew I wanted to paint, but couldn't decide on a color. My son-in-law picked out a neutral and I thought--why not? So I bought the paint and am getting rid of the red and yellow. Now I'm worried the color may be too bland. Sigh--never satisfied.

reply by Joan E. on 14-Oct-2016
    You'll have to live with the more subdued color for a while, before you decide if it appeals to you. You can always accessorize with bright hues. Good luck- Joan

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
    It looks pretty good. Now that the garish colors are gone, it's a big change and I'll have to get used to 'normal.' Will continue the project today. Once I get on a roll--I just keep on going--like that little battery bunny. :) Hugs, Marilyn

reply by Joan E. on 15-Oct-2016
    Ever ready! It sounds like you'll have a productive weekend- Joan
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You had me going. I thought maybe it was a 'new' type of religion. Until I got to the brooms, ha ha. Great Halloween entry! I loved it!!! Blessings...


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
    Hi Judy. Thank you for your review and comments. I have several witchy poem to post before Halloween. All in good fun. Marilyn

reply by Irish Rain on 14-Oct-2016
    I love Halloweeny poems!!!

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2016
    Me too.
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This is a really cool poem. You come up with the greatest ideas! Toad-taco melts sound yummy and so do newt brews. ;)
Thanks for the laugh.


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
    Hi Maria. Thank you so much for your fun review. I had as much fun writing it, too. Marilyn
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I like the artwork you choose for your poem
It is a perfect match
You gave me my first chuckle for today.
No matter what women love to shop,
cookie


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
    Yes, a shopping spree with our girlfriend is the best way to spend the day whether we're witches or mortals. Thank you, Cookie. Marilyn

reply by misscookie on 14-Oct-2016
    You're very welcome, have a nice weekend
    Cookie

reply by misscookie on 14-Oct-2016
    You're very welcome, have a nice weekend
    Cookie
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This is a fun Halloween poem, Marilyn, and a great entry for the Halloween contest. Love your title and theme "Fashionista Witches". "Toad-taco melts" made me laugh, and werewolf pelts is creative! :) Good alliteration with "few fermented" and "toad-taco". Your picture and poem pair perfectly together.

Good luck in the contest, Marilyn!

Connie


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
    Hi Connie. I had a great time with this write. It tickled me to think what those fashionistas would do when out shopping. Thank you for your fun review. Marilyn
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Such a cleverly fashioned witches tale all wrapped in a neat ,brief package. The rhyme
cadence and smo oth flow was exceptional.I thoroughly enjoyed this


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
    Hi Jay. Thank you for your wonderful review and rating. Witches like to go shopping, too. If it's a woman, she wants to shop. :) Marilyn
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Cute, nicely done on the fashion witches, like the same rhyme going in each verse. Best of luck on this fun little piece. Have a wonderful day.


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
    Thank you, William. It was fun to write. This is one of several witchy poems before Halloween. Marilyn
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What a fun response to this image! I smiled all the way through, Marilyn! *smile* You described what this pair is probably doing just perfectly! I'd love to be a fly on the wall!


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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
    Thanks, Robyn. One of several before Halloween. Having fun with them. Marilyn
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