This heart rending Haiku had a big impact on me. Schizophrenia is a soul wrenching, hope -dashing , possible suicidal condition not to mention the legal prospective. I wish you and your son the best. Thank you
What needs work - medical help, understanding.
Your Haiku NOTHING
Wow, oh wow, this is poignant and unforgettable! I never expected such a twist in that last line. In its brevity, this poem tells a story, yet leaves much to reader's imagination. The reader is left pondering after reading the poem. Very few poems move me as yours.
Oh, Lord, your poem immediately brought tears to my heart and eyes!
I too have a son with schizophrenia and in just 16 words, 3 short lines, you have said all I try to say in pages.
What more can you ask of a poem?