oh, my gosh...never expected that ending.
Very well developed plot.
Jack's background story is so compelling. His desire to finally get on with living after so long in prison makes him a sympathetic image in comparison to the desperate job he feels forced to accept, just to survive.
The reader sees and hears, smells and feels what Jack is experiencing.
that was very well written, suspenseful, great descriptions throughout the piece. About half way there was a sense that something was going to happen but didn't know what, the intrigue was worth the wait.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2016
2018 Novelist of the Year. 2017 Short Works and 2017 Script Writer of the Year.