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A young man seeks work at a funeral home. Things get ugly.

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LaRosa
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oh, my gosh...never expected that ending.
Very well developed plot.
Jack's background story is so compelling. His desire to finally get on with living after so long in prison makes him a sympathetic image in comparison to the desperate job he feels forced to accept, just to survive.
The reader sees and hears, smells and feels what Jack is experiencing.
Well done.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016


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that was very well written, suspenseful, great descriptions throughout the piece. About half way there was a sense that something was going to happen but didn't know what, the intrigue was worth the wait.


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2016


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I had a boss like that once. A word of advice get paid up front he may not be there on payday. Better off to see if their hiring at the used car lot.


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2016


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He should never have told Broussard he was alone in the world. Just inviting trouble.

I worked as a funeral director for many years. Thank goodness, we never had anyone like Broussard. LOL.

This was spooky, knowing what was going to happen. 8-)


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2016


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