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Bewitching Halloween


Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Three Times Witchy"

Poems fun and scary

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You got me to chuckle with this one :) I love the rhymes. I think this would be considered a monostitchy rhyme poem? I think you had fun with this one and that oozes out to the reader. This one's terrific, Marilyn. You get my six stars of approval :)


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    Thank you, Joy. The whole series has been so much fun to write for Halloween, as I'm sure yours was for you focusing on the kids' costumes. Boo hoo! Halloween on Monday. I think by then we will all be ready for something different. Marilyn
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Very silly..yet salaciously sinful if one were wizard or witch of the opposite sex..Just trying out my alliteration wand...its broken...
Cute little poem that instills personality and animation in the three witches.


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    Hi Nika. Thank you for reviewing this one in the Halloween witchy series. Much appreciated. Well, Halloween is Monday, so the poems will be finished. Marilyn

reply by Nika2016 on 28-Oct-2016
    :(
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Haha what a great piece, lyrical, fun, perfect rhyme and light hearted. The picture adds to the quality of the piece and I love the reference to bitchiness which as we all know, is a women's forte. Top work.


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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    Hi Joanna. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem in the "Bewitching Halloween" series. They have been fun to write. I appreciate your wonderful comments. Marilyn
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Rolls along in a nice rhythm. I am presuming you Amicans count recipe as two syllybles,in order to get the ten found elsewhere. We Brits give it three Reh-sip-ee. Do you say reh-sip, reh-sype, ree-sip or ree-sype? I would love to know so as I can read this poem properly.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    Thank you, James!!!! Recipe is indeed pronounced as 3 syllables. I have since changes it to read "the brew." Sounds better, too. I appreciate your review, comments, and suggestion. Marilyn
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A very well-written poem. Too many cooks around the pot usually end up in disaster. When the one does not know what the other one's doing.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    Ha, ha. Good comment, Sandra. Correct! Too many cooks spoil the dish. Thank you for reading. Marilyn
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Hi, Marilyn

= LOL ... witchy women indeed.
= Fun end-rhyming in this poem.
= Simple, cool artwork paired with it as well.
= You only have a few days left before the goblins come calling.
= Nice job on this. A great addition to your Halloween series.

<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings ... Jax
<> Published as ... Jacqueline M Franklin


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    Hi Jax. Thank you. By actual Halloween everyone will be halloweened out by all the posts by everyone. Anyway, it's been fun. Marilyn
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Hahaha ... very creative, very FUN, and I love your mono-rhyming! Remind me never to eat any "pine-tar pitchy". No one needs to see this witch running around without a "stitchy"!

I love the humour and the imagery created for your reader, Marilyn. Your poem gave me a good chuckle! :)

Connie



 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Fun stuff for sure--not only my Halloween poems, but all the others I've read, too. It's easy to get carried away with them. I thank you so much for your wonderful review and rating. Thanks, Connie. Marilyn

reply by bichonfrisegirl on 27-Oct-2016
    I've been itchin' to write some more Halloween poems, but I've been swamped with things at home, and haven't been able to do any writing lately. So I can really relate to your poem, as I am getting itchy and bitchy and ready to throw a pitchy fit. :) The curse continues ... Wayne's Mom fell and broke her hip and wrist. I hope to get back to more time for Fanstory by the weekend.

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    Oh my goodness. Thank God you are there for them to rely on. It's up to us to stay healthy to take care of things. Don't forget our writing is our therapy, so we have to make time for ourselves. Hugs, Marilyn
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Three naked witches would give me the twitches
this is a great Halloween story. As usual and got my
imagination going
for that I thank you I had a very good laugh.
Your rhythm and flow phase for a very good read


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Hi Joe. Thank you for reviewing my witchy poem. I'm glad it gave you a giggle. I like humorous writes, too. Halloween is almost here so my series of witchy poems will end. Marilyn
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This was actually rather hilarious (or at least I thought so), looking at the three in the picture and having a visual of them naked was just way too much for me. And of course witches are always portrayed brewing in a group of three. I can attest that nothing is worst than messing up a brew or stew or whatever. It had a great flow and was fantastic to follow and the rhyming was outstanding. Great job Marilyn, thanks for sharing. Happy Halloween.


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Hi aryr. Thank you for your fun review. It's almost Halloween, the three witches have to be sure their brew is ready.

reply by aryr on 27-Oct-2016
    You are very welcome Marilyn, oh yes indeed the brew, the brew.
    (my holiday signature)
    Happy Halloween
    Jack-o-lantern frights
    Safe trick or treats
    On this frightful night.

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    I have changed "recipe" to the brew, which I think is more appropriate.

reply by aryr on 28-Oct-2016
    Lol it is amusing to think that any other time of the year 'recipe' would work but brew is better for Halloween.
Comment by
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Eeeek! Beware of the naked old hag! Oh, wait... that's just my mirror. LOL! SOrry... I couldn't resist. Cute monorhyme poem--I tried not to picture the three of them in the raw. Ugh! :)


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Hi Phyllis. Thank you for your review, LOL! Most people have had that reaction. Marilyn
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