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Bewitching Halloween


Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Killer Jack-O-Lanterns"

Poems fun and scary

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Oh, but I haven't yet had the pleasureof reading this, Marilyn.
At least not until now.
I must say, you've upped the creepiness factor here immensely, and I likewise enjoyed reading it as much.
Excellent scary Halloween fare...
~Dean ;)



 Comment Written 29-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
    Thank you, Dean. I like them all, but I do like this one. If you have time--go back in my portfolio and read, "Way Too Cool." I don't know if you ever read it, but it's one of my favorites--macabre. I appreciate your comments. Marilyn
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Marilyn, I'm sure I already reviewed this poem but it has come my way again. Spooky! I mentioned before how the first line was very clever using - Once upon a vine -
Good job with this nicely rhymed and descriptive read. ~DD


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    Hi DD. Thank you for re-reading this poem and reviewing it. I put an author's note on it so reviewers who had already reviewed it wouldn't do so again. However, it is promoted so perhaps not a total loss. Marilyn

reply by PoemsOfDD on 28-Oct-2016
    Oops, sorry but I didn't mind reviewing again. Happy Halloween ~DD
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Almost like the killer clown thing - disturbing write. An element of Stephen King horror in this. I emerged from the read feeling uncomfortable which I am sure was the intent. DJ


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    Hi DJ. Well it is part of the Halloween series for my little book, "Bewitching Halloween." Yep--meant to be tongue-in-cheek scary. Thank you for reviewing it. Marilyn
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The only pumpkins scarier than the "Killer Jack-O-Lanterns" are those with Clinton's and Trump's faces on them--"wicked kids" carved them too! I enjoyed your rhymed couplets and fun wordplay with "vine". Smiles- Joan


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
    Hi Joan. Thank you for reviewing this one. Appreciate you. Marilyn
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Phyllis Stewart
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Great, creepy poem. The pumpkins are mad! And who can blame them, after those nasty humans mutilated them! I don't do Halloween now, but Mark used to carve the coolest pumpkins. He put on popular tv or movie cartoon characters. One year they were all Simpsons. That's back when our kid was young, of course.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    Wow! Mark must be so talented. My son loves the Simpsons. Thank you for reviewing. Marilyn
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Did you do this one recently? It does seem familiar....but different enough that it makes me question my feeble brain. *smile* It's a tricky, sticky, icky poem! hahaha! Thanks!


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    Yes. See my PM. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Marilyn
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Aaaaaack! Not the killer pumpkins! I don't need those kinds of nightmares.

This reminds me of a thing going around facebook where the pumpkin tells the laughing turkey to look out because he's next for the American Thanksgiving.

This is a fun poem, Marilyn :)


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    So true--the turkey is next--for most people, but I'm vegetarian. The killer pumpkin is coming after me. Thank you for reviewing. Marilyn
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Jacqueline M Franklin
 
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Hi, Marilyn

= Uh-oh, once upon a vine, indeed, with 'Killer Jack-O-Lanterns', sort of like 'The Walking Dead'.
= Another fun read, and great entry for you 'Bewitching Halloween' book.

<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    Thank you, Jax. I appreciate your review. Marilyn
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Very nicely written addition for your book. I love the artwork. You could write a story from the artwork.Your words flowed easily line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    Thank you, Winnona. Your review is much appreciated. Marilyn
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This was a delightful twist for halloween and a great addition to your book 'Bewitching Halloween'. It was a very visual poem, allowing the reader to see the events spoken of. Great job, Marilyn, thanks.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2016



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
    Hi aryr. Your review and comments are great. Thank you so much. Marilyn

reply by aryr on 28-Oct-2016
    You are so welcome Marilyn and that was sweet of you.
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