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Hiya Two socks

Well well well...

The first thing that struck me was the new president...

It maybe small but doesn't this just pack a whopping punch!

Gawd help us all. I do hope that the mass media starts to realise the damage they are doing right now across the globe.
Stirring hate to the point of frenzy. What's done is done. All we can do now is throw a few coins in the odd well and wish that Mr.Trump comes up trumps.

A really thoughtful but terse poem.

Well done you!

much love

twilight :)


 Comment Written 17-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
    HI Twilight, we had the vote of the worst of both evils...I hope and I prayer sweet girl all will be ok...it truly is scary...problem is...you can never trust any of them...sigh...lets cross our fingers...so good to see you...I hope you have been ok...thank you for a great review you...love ya lots...Linda xxoo

reply by trimple on 17-Nov-2016
    The globe is experiencing great changes right now. So many different areas of society are seeing transitions. From the way we shop to the robots that serve us and say thank you!

    what the hell is that supposed to mean?

    With an old a few months ago... we shared some good memories, some of which were very funny. Her response? Instead of laughing, she spelled...

    LOL

    Interesting those ooman beans :)


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
    we have to get back to ...the people are the most important things...not computers and robots...they don't need to eat...sigh...one day at a time....big smiles you...xxoo love

reply by trimple on 17-Nov-2016
    Robots are cheaper to run than humans...

    I wonder what the human race will be like in the future when we reach such a technological peak that the we no longer require physical work...

    I see it beginning to happen now. Adverts suggesting we buy all these gadgets so as not to have to think for ourselves anymore...

    The world is going nuts!

    I wonder what also what the

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
    exactly....robots my be cheaper...but humans are alive...if a robot doesn't eat...it will still work...humans will die...and they are...you are so right girl...the world has gone nuts...I don't know anyone who isn't living under stress...rich and poor...sigh...

reply by trimple on 17-Nov-2016
    We are just going through one of the millions of changes the planet has to offered to pave :)

    Let us not forget the millions of wonderful and decent people that are swirling about this enormous broth of life. We rarely get to read in the media about all the great things going on every moment of every day :)

    Hate faith, my lovely friend

    hugs xxx

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
    if you don't mind...I'll have faith..LOL...I always stand by my faith...my sister and I always talk about how the media has destroyed so many people in this world...I don't even listen to them...lies...and there truly are millions of wonderful people in the world...xxoo

reply by trimple on 17-Nov-2016
    I was referring to 'faith' as in faith in the people of this world who go on unnoticed and brim over with good intentions :)



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
    OHHHHHHHHH...LOL...now you know why I can't write...my mind has turned to silly potty...LOL...love

reply by trimple on 17-Nov-2016
    well look on the positive side...

    You make me feel better about mine :)
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Oh, oh--look out--oops! I enjoyed your use of the short form and mono-verse rhyme. Your Pluto picture selection reinforces the action perfectly. Best wishes in the contest- Joan


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
    HI Joan, Not one of my best...but it did come in second...and that is awesome...I just wrote it fast...thank you so much for going back and reading my poem sweet one...are we traveling anytime some ???...LOL...love ya Linda xxoo

reply by Joan E. on 15-Nov-2016
    Congratulations on your second place--thanks again for sharing your clever creation.

    I've been staying close to home while I heal my discs. I'm over the serious pain and started a new, twice-a-week therapy today for my Peripheral Neuropathy and am hopeful. Take good care of yourself- Joan

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016
    I have been in therapy 2 1/2 months none on my neck popping...I went yesterday back to the neuro surgeon...he said stay with therapy a little longer...it is better...the popping is less...he said keep my laptop high up...not where I am always looking down...I did something to the discs when I turned it...now it is disc on discs...if it doesn't pop to many times the pain is less...that is what we are looking for...I so glad you are doing better...and I am hopeful for us both...still working on this old age stuff...LOL...have a great day sweetie...and you are so very welcome...xxoo Linda

reply by Joan E. on 16-Nov-2016
    Yes, it takes courage to get old! I am so glad to hear your neck is getting better and the surgeon has recommended continuing therapy and gave you tips about raising up your lap top.

    I was impressed by the new electrical therapy yesterday and signed up for a three month program. As I said to the doctor, I have 10 more years, and nothing ventured, nothing gained! Here's to fighting the good fight!! -Joan

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016
    oh!!! you mean 10 years before you have to slow down...LOL...me too...so glad you got back into your therapy too...it does help...just not making me any younger...LOL...wonder if they have therapy for that???...LOL...you take care...I'm coming back slow...but I'm coming back...love xxoo

reply by Joan E. on 16-Nov-2016
    Hopefully, when we feel better, we'll feel younger. I'll take "coming back slowly" over the alternative, any day! Big hugs- Joan

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016
    Amen...to that...bigger hugs back at ya...xxoo have a great evening...
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Linda - you had me at Goofy. When I read the poem I heard it in his voice.
Poem works well and has a lasting message! Being goofy often gets you bruisey.
Glad to talk to you again - been away from FS a few months. Good to be back!
God bless and my best,
Relda


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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
    HI Relda, thank you for going back and reading my poem sweet girl...it is so good to see you back...God bless you as well...and all my best...love Linda xxoo
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This was funny. Very descriptive for so few words. The image added to the words and did not override as some of these small posts do.
Well done.
Have a nice day.
Best wishes
RG


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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
    HI Roy, so good to see you my friend...thank you so much for a great review...I'm glad you like it...best wishes to you as well...love Linda xxoo
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This one made me laugh, and that's always a bonus. It's funny, well oresented with a fitting image, and has a triple rhyme. What more could anyone ask for?

Good luck in the contest
Jane


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
    HI Jane, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad it made you laugh...it came in second...and that is awesome...thank you...love Linda xxoo

reply by sanejane on 10-Nov-2016
    That's great; congratulations. I'm new around here, and I didn't know the judging was over.
    All the best
    Jane xox

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
    that's ok Jane...I have done it before...and I have been here awhile...LOL...if I can help you in anyway just click on my name...all the best to you too...I will be over to see you...xxoo Linda

reply by sanejane on 10-Nov-2016
    Thank you Linda. Who knows? I may need someone to hold my hand.
    Jane xox

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
    anytime Jane...you know where I am...PM me anytime...your always welcome....xxoo
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Lol, I've only recently joined this site, and I love this poem because it was the first one to make me laugh. XD I may read it again the next time I need a good laugh, so thank you for posting!

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
    Hi Jasmine, so good to have you on FanStory...Jasmine when you give a poem a 4 star rating....that is not good...if someone gets a six star on that poem...they will lose it...a four star means something needs to be fixed...and then you tell them what it is...if you like that poem you give it a five star rating....if you really like it you give it a six....but you are only given six...six stars...FanStory has a list of the rules...you might want to read them...I am so glad you love my poem and it made you laugh...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
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This is a fun 1-6-1. It is simple and your words are well-chosen to convey an image, an emotion, and a sound. Your rhymes are playful.

Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
    Hi Sis Cat, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...was just having fun...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Linda,

This is a very clever and upbeat 1-6-1, full of great imagery. I love the accompanying illustration of Goofy. I think that even if it wasn't there, that's what your poem would have brought to mind. Classic.

Good luck in the contest!

Lena


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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
    HI Lena, thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...I love Goofy...LOL...and it came in second...that is awesome...love Linda xxoo

reply by Lena Borghi on 11-Nov-2016
    Congratulations!

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
    thank you so much...xxoo Linda
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Hello, my friend,

You did a fine job with your 1/6/1, your syllable count is right on the money. The presentation is funny and I love Goofy's picture. Good job!
gypsy


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
    Hi Gypsy, thank you so very much my friend....I am so glad you like it...I love Goofy...one of my favorite...thank you....xxoo...
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Haha! Very cute one-six-one tells the whole story with only six words. Excellent use of background color and artwork. Great job!


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
    Hi Kathleen, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...

reply by kathleenspalding on 11-Nov-2016
    You're welcome

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
    smiling...xxoo
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