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Brave Boys of Normandy


A Pantygynt poem: In Rememberance...

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Well written and sympathetic tribute to our wwll soldiers. I found your piece captured well the event and emotions of this day. Thank you for sharing your work.


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    Thanks for reading, Sandy.
    Enjoy your weekend.
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Dean,
If this doesn't bring tears to one's eyes, then s/he is missing the point. The very fact that it is posted, read, & reviewed alludes to the premise that we are free because of the men & women in the military who fought & died for our freedom.

Your poem is awesome. I am not familiar with the format. However, I can say there is great rhyme, super flow, perfect artwork, & an awesome message.

Each piece of art is appropriate in adding emphasis to your poem.

You did a great job with the historical significance & showing how war still is in our minds today.

While we did learn much about how war is fought & its aftermath, many things still remain that need improving--such as the treatment of Veterans.

I know you are a former Marine. Thank you for your service.

Thank you for writing & sharing this poignant poem.

Excellent! Jan


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Six Stars. Dean your presentation and poem is so powerful such great tribute to veterans. OMG you remind us of devastations bloodiness of wars and hope we never have to deal with these again.You bring tears to my eyes. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice


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The greatest generation fought the greatest war.
The battle of Normandy was a blood bath. The U.S. and their allies finally got the upper hand and Hitler was defeated. This poem was a grim reminder that freedom is never free.
The price is very steep. Thank you for your service Dean. God bless America and keep her strong. X Nancy


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Because their war had a purpose, and the front kept moving toward victory, I think the GIs had less mental problems than the men from today's stalled and aimless
wars. They had a cause, they were heroes, and they knew it. Mostly draftees, they made up the noblest army ever. Good salute, Dean. I was four days old on D-day.


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    Thanks for reading, Red.
    Enjoy your weekend.
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Man! can you write. This read smooth as silk and told the story well.
This gave me goose pimples and bought a tear to my eye. So few of the crying youth know why they are aloud to wine. I wonder if the progressives that control what the kids are taught even bother to teach about the brave youth, of the forties, that gave so much. They should march in the Arlington square mile of graves rather than the streets of our cities. Your work evokes such deep thought. You are truly blessed.
Thanks for the write Jax


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Thank you Dean for a well preserved tribute to the Men and Women both on the Battlefield and at home who have served and are serving.
Very Well Done...To Many Memories...Q.T...Phil.


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    Thanks for reading, Quantum Traveler.
    I appreciate your comments.
    Enjoy your weekend.
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reply by Quantum Traveler on 11-Nov-2016
    The Best to You Dean...Q.T...Phil
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Dean, I wish I had six stars to give you for this very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery. Thanks for sharing! Hugs, Teri


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    Thanks for reading, Teri.
    I appreciate your comments.
    Enjoy your weekend.
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Your fine poem is excellent, Dean. This Pantygynt is a tough form but you've done it well. The faces of the young men in the photo break my heart. You have delved into the futility of war, so many lost for freedom's sake. But what can we do when the world is threatened with evil? God bless the bravery of them all, today and every day.

Yesterday was the 241st birthday of the Marines, as you know, I'm sure. My son and son-in-law both Marines as I think you were, too. Marilyn


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    Yes, I celebrated the 241st birthday of my beloved Corps yesterday with a hostess chocolate cupcake, 'M'...

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    Thanks for reading, Marilyn.
    I appreciate your comments.
    Enjoy your weekend.
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This is fantastic I cried what a beautiful tribute your such an amazing writer and your thoughts are right on this deserves more than a six. your best write EVER!!


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