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His Venerable Voice


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Jesus suffered and died so we could live and be saved. His glorious mercy and love for us have no end. In him, we are safe when days go dark in sorrow. He consoles us and gives us hope for better and brighter tomorrow. No matter what you write it is your own unique talent and no one has the right to judge you. Well done Dean, Ella


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2016


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We love Him because He first loved us. Wonderful illustration to compliment your message of faith. I think you are on a contest winner, even tho it wouldn't matter to you, because you just want to share His love with others. I believe He has given you the inspiration to write (whatever genre) to make us laugh. It's not horror to me, it's funny and gives me a lift after the horror I have been through. Thank you Oh Venerable One! XX


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016


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This could have been entered in the story in a poem contest. The testimony in verse is dramatically expressed. I didn't really know about the horror writings but now I understand the horror haiku written about you. :) Timely for Thanksgiving. I guess no one can stereotype your writing style now.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016


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I appreciate your candor in this beautiful expression of your faith in this heartfelt poem Dean. Excellent artwork, rhyming couplets and alliteration.

Thank you for sharing your witness to our Lord and Savior.

Well done Dean.

Blessings and Happy Thanksgiving.
Janet



 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016


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This is a another terrific poem, Dean. It has the touch of explanation that one may feel needed when exercising a desire to be creative, while clinging to the apparent antithetic power which rules us all.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016


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this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the faith that you have and the grace that God gave to you when sparing your life that day. i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest


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Wow! I love this. It's beautiful, perfect rhyme and message. I'm so glad to hear you love the Lord. I think you did once say you were a Christian. I don't have to worry about you anymore. =} Rox


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016


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It is always a powerful, and sometimes destructive, time when people pull God's words into their work. There is no other words on the planet that stand up to those spoken by Him. I feel that you used them well, I saw images, I felt old feelings. I live once again through your words.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
    Thanks so much for taking a vested interest in my poetry, KjSilver.
    Like all of us here, I just try to convey my feelings, thoughts and emotions with everything I have available and at my disposal.
    I am very grateful for your time as well as your comments.
    Take care, my freind.
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Lovely expression of your faith, Dean and the way the lord has helped you. A fine time of the year to express this also. Superb picture to accompany these thoughts. JoAnn


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Dean, I feel this too!! My favorite genre is horror and spookiness. I tried writing about twin flames (not giving up on those books-I wrote three that no agent was interested in) but I need to spook it up a bit--more violence, action, sex, and watch the grammar and typos. :P
Good poem--love the rhyming!


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
    Thanks very much for checking it out, Rasmine.
    I really appreciate it.
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