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We love Him because He first loved us. Wonderful illustration to compliment your message of faith. I think you are on a contest winner, even tho it wouldn't matter to you, because you just want to share His love with others. I believe He has given you the inspiration to write (whatever genre) to make us laugh. It's not horror to me, it's funny and gives me a lift after the horror I have been through. Thank you Oh Venerable One! XX


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This could have been entered in the story in a poem contest. The testimony in verse is dramatically expressed. I didn't really know about the horror writings but now I understand the horror haiku written about you. :) Timely for Thanksgiving. I guess no one can stereotype your writing style now.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016


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I appreciate your candor in this beautiful expression of your faith in this heartfelt poem Dean. Excellent artwork, rhyming couplets and alliteration.

Thank you for sharing your witness to our Lord and Savior.

Well done Dean.

Blessings and Happy Thanksgiving.
Janet



 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016


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This is a another terrific poem, Dean. It has the touch of explanation that one may feel needed when exercising a desire to be creative, while clinging to the apparent antithetic power which rules us all.


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this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the faith that you have and the grace that God gave to you when sparing your life that day. i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest


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Wow! I love this. It's beautiful, perfect rhyme and message. I'm so glad to hear you love the Lord. I think you did once say you were a Christian. I don't have to worry about you anymore. =} Rox


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016


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It is always a powerful, and sometimes destructive, time when people pull God's words into their work. There is no other words on the planet that stand up to those spoken by Him. I feel that you used them well, I saw images, I felt old feelings. I live once again through your words.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
    Thanks so much for taking a vested interest in my poetry, KjSilver.
    Like all of us here, I just try to convey my feelings, thoughts and emotions with everything I have available and at my disposal.
    I am very grateful for your time as well as your comments.
    Take care, my freind.
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Lovely expression of your faith, Dean and the way the lord has helped you. A fine time of the year to express this also. Superb picture to accompany these thoughts. JoAnn


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Dean, I feel this too!! My favorite genre is horror and spookiness. I tried writing about twin flames (not giving up on those books-I wrote three that no agent was interested in) but I need to spook it up a bit--more violence, action, sex, and watch the grammar and typos. :P
Good poem--love the rhyming!


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
    Thanks very much for checking it out, Rasmine.
    I really appreciate it.
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Hello my friend, Dean;
-I was in the Moonies for 5 1/2 months and we used to meditate and have long periods of fasting. After fasting for four days I came upon a creek all by myself and started to ask the Lord questions. And all of a sudden with a rush of exhilaration and warmth I end up crying like I've never cried before but it was a cry of joy. He answered my questions one by one and to this day I cannot remember or recall any of those answers. That's the second time He's come to me.
-Isn't it kind of a normality that whenever you buddy speaks of the Lord they speak of love. And then when all the scientists and people question why are we here and why will be created it comes down to just one simple answer were created for love, to give love, to receive love and to live in love. I try to do this every day and people think I'm crazy because it's not realistic. And that's the point everyone lives today as love is not realistic it's only between two people who supposed to marry and cannot be stronger with anyone else. I sometimes feel so alone not able to reach out to tell people that love is the real answer. Stifled by the reaction of others.
-Thanks for bringing this out in me through your poem, Dean, and your written a beauty here.
-I have to admit I have over 250 fans and out of all of them maybe 40 are always existing and out of the 40 maybe 20 are consistent and out of those 20 only for art exceptional writers and you happen to be one of those 4. After you've taken some classes it showed in your writing, tremendously and I could see it.
-Take care my friend in May his voice find you the peace and happiness your searching for and if you found it hold onto it.
Alex


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2016


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