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This is a change, sure enough. But just because you write horror, doesn't mean you live it. That would mean no horror writers could be Christians either. You are right about writing as a gift for God that we should always be thankful for. Also, that writing is as much a gift of gab as talking is.

Good luck and keep writing anything you feel.

Joan


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I've known you are one of Gods own for a long time now, since you told me of that terrible experience you had. This poem, it's incredible, Dean. The words so simple, yet so heartfelt. I read it aloud, it truly is an awesome poem, my friend. :) Sandra xx


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A really nice write Deano showing your faith in the almighty.
I am not a religious person but I deeply respect your faith and beliefs.Thanks for sharing.

dip


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I had noticed many times
Your strong in faith and love
Your poems I enjoy so much
They are always full of art

The horror tales I like in many ways
I love the thrill and skill
Mostly because they show the truth
Satan is very real

Glimpses of your strong Faith
That I have seen as well
For that I know you are true to art
With a soul filled with Divine Love

Thank you for this poem
It shows more your heart
Still as you say the first step
To write that is the reason for FanStory

God bless your skills
Give many more the chills
From stories of horror
But never forget your heart


 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016



reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    Wow! What an awesome review, Dan, thank you very much for your kind comments as well as you candor.
    Best wishes, Dan, and thanks again for reading.
    ~Dean
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I've seen nothing on your site which I would expect God to find offensive, and I had a feeling you were a man of faith. Respect to you, Dean. This post certainly doesn't shove your faith down the throats of others. It's a testimony to your saviour. What's more, it's a work of art, as are all of your poems.

Thank you for sharing this part of your life today.

All the best,
Jane.


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Very good Dean nicely done with great rhyme and meter. reads and flows well, very spiritual in faith. Never thought any thing other Dean. have a wonderful day.


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Hi Dean!

This is a tremendous piece. You've employed internal and external rhyme in a way to enhance your heartfelt convictions and showcase the gift you've been given. I imagine this one will be hard to beat in the Faith contest!

Good luck!

Kim


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Hello, Dean,

What a beautiful poem expressing your spiritual belief and the love you feel for God. I thank you for sharing your personal story. I have a story of my own. Good job!

Gypsy


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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    I believe we all have a story of our own, Gypsy.
    Thanks for reading.
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Beautiful, Dean.
That's all I can say.
Just beautiful
in every way.

You think I'm just "that horror guy?" then you had best think twice.

Now I know better, and I won't forget. :)


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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    Thanks, Phyllis. I really appreciate that.
    What we write doesn't always define who we are, merely our tastes in literary genres.
    "Write what you know, and do it well," that's what I was always told. I've read horror and science fiction my entire life, so that's what I know.
    Thanks again for your time and wonderful comments.
    All the best.
    ~Dean
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An anomaly is a distortion. Hum.. some spiritual poetry. The whole world is god's temple, not just a man made building. Words are dead if there are no works. Church is like a metaphor, some go to church for a show, some to relieve their conscience for what evil atrocities they have done. Some, actually attend church once a week to feel closer to the Lord, even though church is 7 times a week in the Lord's eyes, infinity. that is one example of what i got from reading the first parables of words. The true WORD weaver leaves a message in each bottle he sets sail amidst the dangerous waters where sharks and predators wait. This poem is not wasted and not heard, it is a riddle that has many answers, different for some... Like this: The air was charged with static as small hairs upon my neck
stood straight on end-my will, it shows. this sentence gives me a sense of hope. "My son, your task has just begun, it will not end today. i will end on that note, your message is inside the bottle with the toy ship inside and I am simply looking at the bottle and trying to decipher the riddles of everlasting life and the reason we are here? Good job WISE ONE. BOO


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