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In Tanglewood Forest
thank you for sharing this Kyrielle about a gallant knight and his quest for love. I enjoyed the poems and I'm thankful you shared your author's notes. Armed with the meaning of your words, I was able to read more into the poem.
~patty~


 Comment Written 24-May-2017



reply by the author on 25-May-2017
    Best wishes and thank you for reading.
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Meia (MESAYERS)
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What an interesting and clever write, I enjoyed it very much, it is completely different form anything I have read and I love that about it. Wonderful write so very well done kindest regards Meia x


 Comment Written 24-May-2017



reply by the author on 25-May-2017
    Thank you I appreciate your kind words.
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Thomas Bowling
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I don't know what a Kyrielle Sonnet is, but obviously this is one. Good luck in the contest. Contests are very hard to win. Good luck.


 Comment Written 23-May-2017



reply by the author on 24-May-2017
    Thank you for the kind words. This is a repost.
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Irish Rain
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In Tanglewood Forest
I love that name...'Tanglewood Forest'...would love to live somewhere named that. Also love the phrase...'Camiknickers in a tangle.' This is a wonderful entry for this contest, good luck, blessings....


 Comment Written 22-May-2017



reply by the author on 22-May-2017
    Thanks for taking ftime to read.
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In Tanglewood Forest
A tangle indeed! An unusual sonnet and I found myself entangled in your words! I wish you luck with the contest and shall avoid camiknickers from now on, he he he, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 22-May-2017



reply by the author on 22-May-2017
    Thanks for the humour.
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damommy
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This flows very well.

I like the use of the olde English. It gave the sonnet real character.

While I understood the words, "graith" did catch me unawares. I didn't know that, so thanks for explaining.


 Comment Written 22-May-2017



reply by the author on 22-May-2017
    Thanks for the comment
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KyColonel Randal
 
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Thank you for sharing. A kyrielle sonnet seems to be quite the challenge. This should be a good poem for the contest you have entered. Good luck with your contest entry!


 Comment Written 22-May-2017



reply by the author on 22-May-2017
    Thanks for your comment. It is a reposting.

reply by KyColonel Randal on 22-May-2017
    That makes sense. I don't remember seeing that contest recently, now that I think about it.
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In Tanglewood Forest
I love the old feel of your Kyrielle sonnet which reminds me of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. I feel the Tanglewood Forest, and the "fine yarn at storytime kindles." I love the romance of it. Your choice of old English words show that you did your research, creating a poem that sounds like it came from the Arthurian period. Your poem made me sigh in memory of my English literature class in college.

Excellent use of F and G alliteration:

in their faith faire worn her favor
in green graith good grace to mingle
In an endless knot entangle

Fine and rich details and words throughout.

Thank you for sharing your most excellent poem. I wish you success in the contest.


 Comment Written 22-May-2017



reply by the author on 22-May-2017
    Thanks for the kind words. This is a repost. Perhaps I should note that.
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In Tanglewood Forest
I think you have a wonderful poem with a great rhyming scheme and a wonderful message. I think you have made some great choices when it comes to words and I am glad that you gave the definitions because I have no clue as to what some of them are. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 22-May-2017



reply by the author on 22-May-2017
    Thanks for your comment. I have revived this because someone commented on the form,
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Memoir of the Whaletown Ferry
An excellent contest entry. You should do well. It seems to meet all the requirements for this contest. Good luck. I hope you win.


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2016



reply by the author on 09-Dec-2016
    Sorry for the late reply. Thank you for your review.
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