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All rhymes, but different flavors of rhyme

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Byronic Santa
Combine youthful passions with the great Bard Byron and I guess as you have so cleverly just demonstrated: You can't lose! Now I see why Baudelaire did not work so well for me!!! Reciting phrases naughty and filled with debauchery, didn't even get a C, in that category. Great poem as usual David, and one I would give my sons, alas, they are beyond that wisdom, so I will give it to my three grandsons instead and hope they follow your concise and erudite instructions down to the "poetic" letter. easy


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2005


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Ah, Byron, George of the vinegar and potatoes! I always like these off-the-cuff-seeming story poems, which are every bit as meticulous as your earlier sonnets. This one has the flavour (not sure why) of poems by an Aussie named Max Fatchen. Max is one of the poets I have admired forever, so I'm paying you a compliment!


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2005


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Byronic Santa
The memories, the observations in the bookstore and the selection of the book and the reasons are all well presented with your unique and talented poetic skill. Interesting choice of rhymes that work well. The poem tells the story so well without sidetracking, interconnecting all segments. A great write.


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2005


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your brain scares me, my friend, Lol. Weird but what else should I expect from you. Even your weird writing is excellent. one thing about your poetry, the reader never knows what to expect. Thats why we all keep coming back.


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2005


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Morning Shave

Your poems are becoming mini cinemas in my mind, more witty and dear then Tom Hanks and Meg Ryan movies. :) Very well done. I had to smile at the curse cuz I hear that one coming out from the bathroom everyday when James shaves too. lol.

Great work. :)


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2005


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Byronic Santa
I'll take Byron over Harry any day, although I love magic...:)

This is so full and the undertone I hear is a strong desire for a cousin to be the best influence he can be and influence a cousin toward higher ideals.

Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh

Excellent presentation.

I wrapped the book, and placed a Christmas card
to mark the page, and scrawled "Become this bard.
Disperse these words like fuel, and burn Atlanta
with phrasal genius"?Your Byronic Santa


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2005


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this was a very interesting story poem, kind of long, but very well written.
i liked the rhyme, it worked very well and made it flow good,
thank you for the read.


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2005


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I liked the way you described the covy of Harry Potter fans on that first day of the latest release. I must admit I stood my ground to get my copy early enough to read it before I had to fork it over to my grandsons who were coming to visit in a few day. I made it, barely.


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2005


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Byronic Santa
A truly unique gift.
I like the way you decribed the fans hovering around Harry Potter then finding that book that brought back memories of times past.
Great job!


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2005


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Byronic Santa
I prefer your poems when you don't swear, but otherwise this was a delight. The idea of a "Byronic Santa" tickles me to death. I hope he'll make good use of those poems.


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2005


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