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What would you give to see that smile? (a poem)

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A very well-written poem. As humans we are never happy with what we have. We always want more and better to sooth our egoes, while many don't even have the necessary to survive.


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CHILD WANTS TO KNOW THE ANSWERS TO THE QUESTIONS BUT LETS IT PASS FOR THE TREATMENTS HE MUST HAVE FOR THE ILLNESS THAT HAS KEPT HIM IM THE HOSPITAL. HE WILL ALWAYS WONDER WHAT COMES NEXT


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Loved this Dawn. Such a clever twist at the end and I particularly like the elegance of this form. I would have loved to have given you a six but the site wouldn't let me. ???xxx

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
    Huh? Okay, the virtual is wonderful anyway (and it's so good to see you)! Thank you so much!
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Beautifully scribed Dawn, as all your work is, the narrative is lots of fun, it has a lovely meandering theme and bops along in its own merry way, with a delicious flippancy, well done, my friend in no set meter and couplet rhyming, well done, Blessings, Roy

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
    Thanks Roy. It's actually another pitch for donations for Sick Kids Hospital in Toronto. I did one a couple of years back and thought it's time for another one. That second video is one of their ads, and it's magnificent.

reply by royowen on 08-Jan-2017
    Well done

reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
    Thanks so much. Having laptop problems, so rushing my replies. Much appreciate the support, though!

reply by royowen on 08-Jan-2017
    That's fine Dawn
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