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Calm or Fury

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Meia (MESAYERS)
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Freezing crystal drops to spears of ice burning
Flora and fauna with deadly frost erecting
Frigid bergs in the north and south
Around the axis of the earth; declaring
Nature's enigma of kindness and cruelty........
This is magnificent, the flow, the rhyme, the structure, it stirred emotion in me, it made me thinks of wildness and then just at the end you bestow the reader with the delicacy of the last two lines. In my view a perfect and very accomplished poem. Kindest regards Meia :)


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2017



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much for your excellent rating and your very kind words. Catherin
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A great poem in that it flows very nicely and smoothly. Very well put and I liked the way you relate to the sea and land. Very well thought out!


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2017



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
    Thank you for your kind words and your excellent rating.
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brenda bickers
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Wow, I wish I had a six to give.
Your alliteration and metaphors are wonderful to read and this poem just flows from beginning to end. There is so much beauty in mother nature but she has a rage that can devastate what ever stands in her way.
This was good.
Brenda:))x


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2017



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
    Thank you for your excellent rating; and your very kind words.
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