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Broken Flowers

Seldom mend ( Last stanza audio, by the author )
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What an emotive poem, and likewise the prose underneath, RGSTAR. The cry of inner thoughts is powerful, and the mental images are graphic. I read this today, on what is being celebrated as International Women's Day, and feel so affected. When your words are applied to the millions of plagued, tortured, and suffering ladies all over the world today, I also recognise their importance. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2017 |
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017
Yes, so glad it coincided with 'Women's Day'
Thank you so much.
Thank you for the six stars, dear author.
Have a great day.
RGstar
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Comment by | Premier Author | | Premier Reader | | Poet Rating     Rank: 31 | Author Rating For Short Works      | Review Stars      Rank: 126 | | |
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Comment by | Premier Author | | | | Poet Rating      | Author Rating For Novels      | Review Stars  Rank: 242 | | |
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ROY!
A slap to the senses as words cut deep. I don't think I have ever sighed as much in such a short period... and as my souls cried and hollowed out as I delved into the power of these masterful words and verses as they entered my eternal soul... okay, make that, as now I weep reading what this has awaken in my memory and... my thoughts to be.
You my Brother... a 'Man' amongst men, it is 'Man' such as you that makes our species sound and look half good considering the stains our lot has, is and will cause.
As archaic as I may sound... I am duty bound to protect and nurture the givers of life and love... it is in my contract. Maybe because of the domestic violence I also witnessed growing up... yes, our lives do run parallel in so many instances, right down to my Mothers transition last year from cancer and the brain tumors that finally won the battle... it blows my mind and perception!
Thank you once more for sharing such a powerful piece of writing... you my Brother know how to enter a persons soul... very special indeed! A 1%er... I have no doubt!
With our thoughts we create,
the knowledge of righteousness.
James.
********************Stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2017 |
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
My brother you never fail to do, either me, or yourself with the integrity of your person both for. As well your own work. The day is never quite complete until you arrive. Thank you so much my friend. Thank you for the super six.
My best, James.
RG
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Comment by | Premier Author | | flylikeaneagle - Nancy Ann Gee | | Poet Rating      | Author Rating For Short Works      | Author Rating For Novels      | Script Rating      | Review Stars   Rank: 253 | | |
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