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Broken Flowers


Seldom mend ( Last stanza audio, by the author )

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Kerry Robinson
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That was absolutely beautifully written. Your chosen words expressed so deeply,so clearly. The rhyme was outstanding. It flowed like a wondrous flowing river, in prime of it's beauty.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much, Kerry. I love that name, both boys and girls, as my brother is so named.
    Thank you for the support and the six stars.
    My best wishes.
    RGstar
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A very strong and yet sensitive poem, in praise of all womanhood. It is beautifully worded with feeling displayed in each and every line.

This is a truly excellent posting.

Thank you.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much. Wishing you a great Sunday. Thank you for the support.
    Best wishes.
    RGstar
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Wow, RG, this is very powerful. I have never suffered abuse, but I feel very strongly for those who have. My book Sally is about that and what the consequences can be. How talented you are. Very emotional, and frightening. All the best. Ulla:))


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Hi, Ulla. Yes, strong write. I need to write something light for next post.
    Thank you, my friend.
    Thank you for the six stars.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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A brilliant work of art. For all women everywhere, comes the voice and words of a true man! I wish every woman a man such as yourself. I can't imagine a more empowering poem for a woman. Every girl should read this, every woman who doubts her reason for being.

I wish I could give you more stars than six!!

Take care,
Rhonda


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Dearest, Rhonda. Thank you so much. Always good to see your name.
    Thank you for the six stars and the lovely gesture.
    My best wishes.
    Have a lovely Sunday.
    RG
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Margaret Snowdon
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An opus of love, she's all of these
Our embryos primed, she bears with ease
She is herbs of the morning and Jasmine at night
She's a flock of geese and birds in flight
She is mother to us all, and all is she
And whenever she falls, as such... do we

This is a deep and meaningful poem as a tribute to all women,
which I found touching and emotional, pulling at my heart-strings...
since I was a victim of mental and physical abuse for 12 long years,
but was fortunate to walk away with my children.

You are such a talented writer, my friend

Margaret


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Sorry to hear that dear Margaret. So strong to move on.
    My best to you, as usual, it is a pleasure just to see your name.
    Have a lovely Sunday evening.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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I appreciate you sticking up for women and taking a stand against all the wrongs done to them by men.

This is very powerful and emotional RG, which of course, means it is extremely well written.

Teresa


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Thank you s much, Teresa.
    I appreciate the support.
    Wishing you a lovely Sunday.
    RG
    Thank you for the six stars. :)
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Hello RG,

Tyranny is a despicable thing! Your poem speaks volumes in letting all know that tyranny is wrong, and can have long lasting ill effects on those affected by it. To hurt a woman, hurts not only that woman, but others as well, especially the children (as you know from first hand experience).

This cleverly crafted piece is an extraordinary write. It is a sad write, but it delivers a strong message. I love it all. Some of the standouts for this reader:
- "So, remember well who gave you life"
- "When you hail his name as she mops the stain" ... original ... intense imagery
- "She is herbs of the morning and Jasmine at night" ... so poetic! :)
- "And whenever she falls, as such ... do we" ... terrific, insightful ending!

You always go the extra mile with your writes, RG ... and it shows!

Connie


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Hi, Connie. Sorry a little late getting back.
    Thank you so much.
    I hope you are having a calm, happy Sunday.
    Thank you so much for the six stars.
    RG
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What does one say about a masterpiece? Having been in an abusive marriage myself, I am profoundly amazed at your ability to capture the fear, anxiety and strength that someone in that position lives with and feels. You give strength and hope without judgement and understanding without pity. This is a level of art I can only hope I might one day be able to dream of making.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Your art is there, dear megsiew, just different.
    Thank you so much for your lovely words and support.
    Thank you for the six stars.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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This is a very sad poem about a beaten woman. It is very relatable and I can feel the woman's pain. The thing is most woman think they and change him, but they can't. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Thank you, dmt.
    My very best wishes.
    Have a great Sunday.
    RGstar
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And yet when men are scorned and humiliated by liberated women, the old Hebraic and Islamic ways beckon. Jesus(or Hillel, or the author of Tobit) had the only good answer for both genders...do unto others. And why are so many Islamic women loyal
to their men, their Allah, their traditions? More data needed. The poem here is
most excellently written and presented.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017
    Thank you, LIJ.
    Some questions we will never be able to answer, except in question, almost certainly man made.
    Thank you so much.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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