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That Little Blue Pill


Adult humor

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nancyrabbrose
 
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I may not believe in the philosophy in this poem, but I do like it. It is very clever. Perhaps the men who read it will appreciate it more than I, as to the philosophy. Clever of you to use Niagra for the rhyming of Viagra. Very funny poem. (P. S. I worry about these old men's hearts. Too much stimulation by a drug and a heart attack may not be worth the short-time "fun". Forgive me if this is too "preachy".


 Comment Written 01-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    I am 92 with abad heart so I won't be taking any of those little bluepills.Thank you

reply by nancyrabbrose on 02-Mar-2017
    I was not preaching to you in particular. Thank you for your comments. I thought it was a good poem, as I stated.
    Please take good care of yourself.
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Oh wow what an great write my friend hope
to read more oif your writing soon this peace
has a sence of wonder keep up the great work you do


 Comment Written 01-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this and wish to thankyou
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Hello jaybird1, Very good, very cute. Your poem made me laugh, especially:

And soon he was out chasing gals,
some only half his age.

(And those gals only half his age will not let themselves be caught unless 'ol friend has a big stiff, stuffed wallet to match his warmed "Niagara." But you can't blame a guy for trying. Big-teeth smile.)

And yes, this is happening all over the world. A modern day poem. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your inspiring comment
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This is an absolutely hilarious poem. Very well written and Very fun to read. I laughed from beginning till end. Thank you for posting this one.


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    Glad you liked it-thank you
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sanejane
 
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Haha - I've heard some horrifying tales of men - and women - who've taken too much viagra. Let me tell you about what happened to my brother-in-law on his wedding night... or maybe not, on second thoughts. The marriage didn't last, anyway. My sister was exhausted by the time they split up.
Back to your poem - in three words; excellent and fun.


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    I really enjoyed your comment -thank you

reply by sanejane on 04-Mar-2017
    It was my pleasure, jaybird.
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LOL!! If I had a six you would have it. Good humor. I really like the rhyming here. Keep on writing. I needed the laugh :P


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    You seemed to enjoy it-thank you very much
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Bearing in mind your own age here I think you could be speaking from the experience of your own deja vu. Yes I think that could be quite likely since you must have outlived many of your old, old friends. Now where did I put my shopping list?


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I found your poem to be a interesting read and it made a laugh
they only feel up. As long as they take the pill last.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    Thank you friend. I enjoyed your comment

reply by misscookie on 02-Mar-2017
    You're very welcome, have a nice day.
    Cookie
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I enjoyed your humorous poem. Life is too short, and we need to live to feel alive. A bit of laugh won't hurt anyone. Your poem rhymed beautifully, and words are flowing. Well done. Blessings, Ella


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    Glad it brought a laugh-thank you

reply by Ella25 on 02-Mar-2017
    You are welcome. Have a great day. Ella



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I enjoyed reading your poem, as I enjoy reading a bit of humor. Life is too short to be serious all the time. Your poem flowed and rhymed beautifully, though I think I will stay away from those "happy" pills.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much. GLad you enjoyed this poem

reply by marybell1 on 05-Mar-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
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