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Will Someone Say Amen?


A prayer for help

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AMEN, dear jaybird! i love your philosophical sentiment and the insightful commentary.
thank you for sharing!
unfortunately no sixes left..
blessings and a Christmas cheer hug!
rebekka xxx


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2019


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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. The poem sounded like a soft, personal prayer. Good job and very well done.


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This was truly remarkable to read. It is true. It is very important to remember that God has a plan regardless if we understand it or not. And it is important to remember that he DOES reveal his ways to us in ways for us to understand.
I hope this resonates.
Nicely written


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J-bird's complaint is addressed ostensibly, and primarily, to God, but, by extension, to us readers, also. His words are simply eloquent, and eloquently simple ... like the prayers of real people. Well-done.


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Jay: stars for your poem. We must share our faith with others.
We must stop harming people and walk in love. I'll say AMEN!
Too many fight in congress and we must unite. Love and blessings.
flylikeaneagle Stars for you...


 Comment Written 20-Dec-2019


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Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a nice feel to it and a clear message. Thanks for sharing this poem and have yourself a really great day


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I rather take a trip live in the moment and vacation at Universal Studios. God had a plan. Adam ate the apple. We were banished to make life from our own minds. Too many things accomplished by mankind with modernization and technologies. Can we find a way back to God?

Enjoyable poem to read. It made me think. God bless us all.

Merry Christmas :)


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I like how this poem rhymes in the lines. You expressed with emotions. I have enjoyed reading this poem. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thanks for sharing!


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Well, Amen! You know how to put a prayer together! I've always found it sad that there are so many denomination out there. Each one believing it knows something a little different than the next church! But there is really only one truth. xoxo


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A philosophical vein running through these inspiring stanzas that reflect on Mankind's place in the world and how he negotiates the earthly journey - just what poetry does best - enables us to reflect on the 'big' issues


 Comment Written 19-Dec-2019


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