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Our blue print


A tanka contest.

  22 total reviews 
Comment by
Unspoken94
 
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Mary, I have always valued your work but this piece
is exceptional. It makes this reader go deep within
myself. I hope we get to vote in this one. You've
got mine. -Bill


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
    Wow Bill I am so happy that you really like my entry into the tanka contest. The six stars are so welcome and appreciated. Thanks, Mary
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Joan E.
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After I read the intriguing title and scrolled down the page, I was surprised to see the image. It was an ah ha moment as I read your tanka. I admired your pivot and message. Best wishes in the contest- Joan


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
    Thanks Joan for the excellent review, I love your comments. Mary
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marybell1
 
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I enjoyed reading your tanka "Our Blueprint." What a wonderful invention. They were not around when I came into the world. All your lines and syllables were correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
    Thanks for the excellent review and great comments, Mary

reply by marybell1 on 24-Mar-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
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Kerry Robinson
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That was truly a spectacular Tanka entry.
I absolutely loved it. "from the blueprint you evolve"
=outstanding. Good luck. ~Kerry~


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
    Thanks Kerry, I am so pleased that you think my tanka as spectacular, Mary

reply by Kerry Robinson on 23-Mar-2017
    Your welcome
Comment by
Pearl Edwards
 
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Great Tanka for this contest Mary, and a good message. I agree we need to listen to our inner wisdom or our sixth sense because it's usually leading us down the right path for us. Nicely done, and good luck in the contest.
cheers
valda


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much Valda for the exceptional review and the wonderful comments. I really appreciate it, Mary
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Ella25
 
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It is a fascinating concept and beautifully presented, Mary. The baby in the womb is a real miracle. So precious and protected. A blueprint of life. Well done. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
    Thanks ella for your excellent review and great comments. Mary

reply by Ella25 on 27-Mar-2017
    You are welcome, Mary. Sorry for the late respond. I have been away from this site for few days. Other things keep me busy. With love, Ella
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This is a very interesting Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
    Thanks Teri for a wonderful review and great comments. Mary
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Dolly'sPoems
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We all have our own unique blueprint which sets us apart from each other. These identifying traits can either blight or give us flight. I wish you good luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
    hi Dolly I am so pleased you enjoyed my tanka about our blue print, thanks. Mary
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country ranch writer
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The first time I saw amsonafram I was amazed mat how far our technology had come. Wow they can do so much these days it is a miracle of birth that astounds us and keeps us in awe.


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
    Thank you for the excellent review and great comments. Mary
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Meia (MESAYERS)
 
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'we can be stronger
guided by inner wisdom
it lies deep within
a purpose to develop
from our blue print we evolve'
How beautiful this poem is! The wonderful words of this poem made me feel very emotional you have a great talent brilliant work xxMeia x


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
    Hi Meia I am delighted that you really enjoyed my tanka and found it to be brilliant work. Thank you so much, Mary
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